Talk:Leave It All to Me/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Quite a short article, which I will measure against the GA criteria today. --K. Peake 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

  • Remove venue parameter from the infobox because that is for live recordings
  • Separate the labels using bullet points instead
  • Target Michael Corcoran to Michael Corcoran (musician)
  • Move audio sample to being in the opening section, aligned to the left
talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply
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Background and composition

  • "Miranda Cosgrove was asked by" → "Cosgrove was asked by"
  • Target theme song to Theme music
  • "Cosgrove explained she" → "The singer explained she"
  • "or been a recording studio," → "or been in a recording studio,"
  • "one of Bell's band members." → "one of Drake Bell's band members."
  • "features her former Drake & Josh co-star, Drake Bell." → "features Bell, who co-starred with her in Drake & Josh."
  • The source does not mention the song's genre as being pop
  • There is no info about the comp apart from the above unsourced genre and literally nothing on the lyrics; can you try and add something?

Release and reception

Promotion and impact

  • Wikilink music video
  • "was later released on" → "was later released to"
  • "headlining 2011 concert tour" → "headlining 2011 concert tour the"
  • "the song at Cosgrove's performance at Club Nokia." → "the song at Club Nokia, with his appearance gathering cheers from the crowd." since this part is mentioned by the source but is missing for some reason
  • "it had been six years since Cosgrove released her extended play, High Maintenance," → "it had been around six years since Cosgrove released her second extended play High Maintenance,"
  • "In April of the same year," → "In April 2017,"
  • "had stated in the past that she" → "revealed that she"
  • Target lip-syncing to Lip sync

Credits and personnel

  • Good

Charts

  • See
    MOS:TABLECAPTION

References

  • Copyvio score looks great at 12.3%; ignore the flagged URL because that is not used anywhere here
  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Ref 15 is citing a duplicate URL; use the correct one instead

External links

  • Remove this because the music video is linked to from the infobox

Final comments and verdict

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I am not too sure about the article's notability though this will become clearer after your response. --K. Peake 08:37, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done!
talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply
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The Ultimate Boss With the comment about the audio sample, I meant it should be in the background and composition section on the left. Also, you could definitely do with adding a mention of the lyrics to the lead. --K. Peake 10:14, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
talk) 10:26, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply
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The Ultimate Boss I copy edited slightly, but it looks good apart from no text on the audio sample detailing the lyrical content; add this since it is sourced in prose, as well as the length of the snippet. --K. Peake 10:30, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
talk) 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply
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✓ Pass, sample text looks good now! --K. Peake 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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