Talk:Mall (song)

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

• Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

• Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
• and fans → remove
• occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid → occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.

 Done

Background and composition

• song length → songs length
• together with → and
• With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
• Add the release dates here

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

• President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Music video and promotion

• intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
• frantic → not very encyclopedic
• Add the music video source at the end of the description. Not done

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Festivali i Këngës

• Fine

Lisbon

• small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Personnel

• Fine

Track listing

• Fine

Release history

• Fine

References

• Rate Your Music → non-reliable
• Reference 21 → publisher, not work
• Reference 33 and 34 → no publisher or work mentioned
• The voice source is not working properly → archive it

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:13, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]