Talk:Mexico at the 2014 Winter Paralympics

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Lead Grammar

I'm sure where to put this remark since I see it on every "(Country) at the 2014 Winter Paralympics" entry. The lead section begins "(country) are scheduled to compete..." Shouldn't the verb be is since a country is singular? "(country) is scheduled to compete..." If someone agrees with this comment, every country article for this paralympic game should be changed. Piguy101 (talk) 12:42, 10 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Thanks for the comment. The best place to raise it is at
WT:OLYMPICS. Lugnuts Dick Laurent is dead 12:50, 10 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
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Also, this question will be redundant in a couple of weeks, as the intro will read "(Country) competed at the ...." Lugnuts Dick Laurent is dead 18:37, 10 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Review

Hello. Happy to start this review! I think the article is ripe for promotion. I just need to check its grammar and go through the sources. One thing that caught my eye is that there are no sources in Spanish (not the editor's fault, but I still want to do some digging to see if more information can be used to update the article). This is not a requirement for GAs, since it appears to cover 3a and 3b criterias (addresses main topic and stays on topic). But I'll know more when I start reading and researching. Either way, nice job here! I'll post the review soon.

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Thanks! I tried to look for Spanish sources, but failed to find anything too relevant, would love if you found something to add! Courcelles (talk) 20:43, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Background

  • Arly Velásquez, an alpine skier – He is linked in the section after this, but not here. I would link it here and remove the link that follows. I would also link alpine skiing for those unfamiliar with it.

Disability classification

  • there is often overlap between this and other categories – I feel like this is better in parenthesis or in a footnote. If you write it as "... though there is often overlap between this and other categories" it should work too.
  • Les autres, any physical disability that does not fall strictly under one of the other categories – Link Les autres, since I doubt many readers will know what it is. Since it is the last classification, add an "and" before "Les autres".
  • for example dwarfism or multiple sclerosis. – I think the word "like" instead of "for example" sounds better here, but I'll leave it up to you.

Alpine skiing

  • Arly Velásquez was 25 years old at the time of the Sochi Paralympics – Remove link as previously stated, and keep surname only.
  • he required surgery and was out of competition for two years – Wow. That's crazy.

Sources

I found multiple sources in Spanish that can shed some light on Arly's preparation and comments for Mexico prior to the competition. I didn't read all of them in their entirety so I apologize if there is some redundancy. In this source by

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Will do when I get home tonight. Courcelles (talk) 22:05, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]