Talk:Oregon Occupational Safety and Health Division
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This article was in pretty bad shape, but contained a fair amount of info -- see this revision: [1]
Now a new editor has rewritten it, including several references that are neither
inline
nor online. So the article still needs a fair amount of work.
Is there cited info from the previous article that should be incorporated? Govmatters, can you add your citations inline with the new text you've added? -Pete (talk) 23:21, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
- Hey Pete, I just did some cleanup--I was going to drop a note at talk) 23:32, 27 May 2009 (UTC)]
- I agree it needs work. FWIW, these are changes I made, including moving the pile of unfootnoted "notes and references" to a "Further reading" section and turning embedded titled external links into refs, as is my wont. talk) 13:28, 28 May 2009 (UTC)]
- I agree it needs work. FWIW, these are changes I made, including moving the pile of unfootnoted "notes and references" to a "Further reading" section and turning embedded titled external links into refs, as is my wont.