Talk:Sea of Voices

Release and promotion

• "Though the song came as a surprise to followers of his work, it was well-received by audiences." I feel like this should be in Reception; same for the trending topic info

   Done —TS

• You should mention that the song specifically became a trending topic during the Oscars

   Done —TS

• There is no information about the remixes here

   Added —TS

Reception

• "'Sea of Voices' received a generally positive critical response." I'm not a big fan of this when it's not referenced, though I understand if you want to keep it.

  In progress. I can probably bundle a few citations to verify this statement, but I'll remove it if that's not possible. —TS

  original research. —TS

• "but was nonetheless accepted by his fans." If the "it was well-received by audiences" sentence above is moved to this section, I think you should merge these two sentences, because they say the same thing.

   Done —TS

• "and Vice commented" → "and a Vice writer commented", to clearly differentiate from Stolman

   Done —TS

• "Several reviewers found the song reminiscent of the electronic band M83" — you need to add more references here to justify "Several reviewers", as currently there is just one

  This is verified by the following footnotes as well, but I can see how that could be confusing to readers.  Done —TS

• "prior to the release of his album Nurture, Robinson released the single 'Unfold' in collaboration with Totally Enormous Extinct Dinosaurs." → "Robinson released 'Unfold', a collaboration with Totally Enormous Extinct Dinosaurs, as a single from his second studio album Nurture." — or something similar, just to make it clear that "Unfold" is a single from that album

   Done —TS

References

• Ref 6 needs timestamp

   Done —TS

• "Interview" → "interview" in the title of ref 6, as you're following a consistent title casing for the references. I just discovered the URL has "OwO". I can't unsee this now.

  done uwu —TS

  :3 Skyshiftertalk 00:50, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Add italics to "Your EDM" in the title of ref 10

   Done —TS

• Italicize the name of the album in the title of ref 18

   Done —TS

• YourEDM → Your EDM on ref 19

   Done. Thanks for the more detailed reference formatting checks! —TS

Spot-check

• 1 → "worked really hard on" isn't here, I think you meant to cite Cuepoint. Otherwise fine

  Correct;  fixed. —TS

• 7 → Fine, but I'd recommend citing ref 8 again immediately after the "sweeter, cuter, [and] more feminine" quote to clarify where it's from

   Sure —TS

• 8 → McCarthy didn't find inspirations from Justice. The article quotes Robinson saying Justice's "Cross" is an inspiration for him in general. Otherwise fine

  That's quite a silly thing for me to miss!  Removed —TS

• 11 → Fine
• 15 → Fine
• 17 → Fine

 On hold Skyshiftertalk 18:32, 15 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Skyshifter: All comments addressed! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 06:46, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TechnoSquirrel69: As the "received a generally positive response" sentence was removed from Reception, I've reworded a sentence from the lead — feel free to adjust it. I am now Y passing this article! Skyshiftertalk 09:46, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]