Talk:Shawna Robinson/GA1

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:15, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  15:15, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Disambiguations: No links found.

Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (

   lists

   ):

   "and made her début in the Winston Cup Series (now the Sprint Cup Series)" - no accented 'e' in American English

   removed MWright96 (talk) 21:21, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

   "Robinson was born on November 30, 1964 in Des Moines, Iowa" - needs a couple of links

    Done MWright96 (talk) 21:21, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

   "She and her siblings, were taught that they were allowed to do anything" - unnecessary comma

   removed MWright96 (talk) 21:21, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (

   reliable sources): c (OR

   ):

   No original research found.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Once again another excellent article. If you plan on taking this to FAC then I would recommend adding some images if possible. I read through the whole thing and checked most of the references I could access, but couldn't find any issues so I'll pass this outright. Well done! JAGUAR  18:53, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]