Talk:Sir Bevil Grenville's Monument

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What else do people think needs to be done to this article to ensure it meets the Good article criteria before a nomination?— Rod ^talk 08:20, 17 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:54, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Grabbing this one for a review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 10:54, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, review time.

• Lead: Swap around cites 3 and 2 so that they're in the correct numerical order.

• Done.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• History: As with the other article, move citations to after the following punctuation mark for cleanliness.

• As before done where a cite only covers one fact in the sentence but moved now

• Typo in the last sentence of the section: "rapairs" - "repairs"

• Done.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "funded by Granvilles descendants" = "funded by Granville's descendants"?

• Thanks - I'm always being criticised for apostrophe abuse.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Description: Link
  English Baroque

• Done.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "Battle of Lansdowne(1643)" - needs a space between Lansdowne and (1643)

• Done.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Background - I'd move this section up above History, as it'll be the first thing to occur in the timeline.

• Moved.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Once you've dealt with those, I'll take another look. Miyagawa (talk) 20:33, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Thanks again.— Rod ^talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Great, happy to promote this one too. Miyagawa (talk) 22:48, 1 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]