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Reviewer: Esculenta (talk · contribs) 21:49, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this one. Comments coming this weekend. Esculenta (talk) 21:49, 17 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Drive-by comment

  • A section on habitats seems to be missing (e.g., are they all terrestrial, or are there aquatic species, too?). --Jens Lallensack (talk) 15:03, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    • All terrestrial, at least I've never seen anything to the contrary. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:09, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      What about [1]? Apart from terrestrial/aquatic, I still feel that a general section on habitats is necessary. Jens Lallensack (talk) 15:18, 18 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

Missing info (imo)

  • how many slime molds are there, and how these numbers are divided into the various slime mold groups
    • This is, per my general comment above, basically adding apples and oranges. But we can say something for the main groups.
    • Added discussion of totals.
  • no mention of phagocytosis?
    • Added.
  • what was the first slime mold to have been discussed/described scientifically? Lycogala epidendrum by Pankow in 1654, says Introductory Mycology (4th ed.) p. 776
    • Added.
  • no mention or use of Martin & Alexopolous's work "The Myxomycetes" (1969), which was a widely used and influential textbook
    • Added.
  • no mention of how these things are studied, or the "moist culture chamber", introduced by Gilbert & Martin in 1933 (Myxomycetes found on the bark of living trees. Iowa Studies Nat. Hist., 15: 3-8), which is now the standard apparatus used to grow these creatures. Also, check out this useful article. Esculenta (talk) 02:42, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    • Added.
  • there's no section that clearly describes/compares/contrasts the common morphological features of slime molds. Alexopolous says that four types of plasmodia are recognized (phaneroplasmodium, aphanoplasmodium, protoplasmodium, and a fourth type intermediate between phaneroplasmodia and aphanoplasmodia, found in the Trichiales). Apparently there's also four type of fruiting bodies (sporangia, aethelia, pseudoaethelia, plasmodiocarp). These should be described and explained. What are the parts of the fruiting body? (hypothallus, stalk, columella, pseudocolumella, peridium, capillitium, pseudocapillitium). Can we have a bit of text discussing the spores? How large are they in general? Colour? Are spore characteristics typically used as taxonomic characters? What about the spore-balls of Badhamia?
    • General point, again: this differs per group (Myxogastria is just one of the clades), and there's little we can say that will apply across all the slime mold clades. See the next item for the issue, which applies to many of the comments raised.
    • Specific point: we can certainly say something per (sub)group on reproduction, but we shouldn't go far into the intricate details of each group's reproductive parts. I can see there's a tendency to want to write the equation "Myxogastria = slime mold" and then go into detail from old textbooks, but the equation is wrong and would seriously unbalance this article.
      • Perhaps more like a "Comparative morphology" that describes and compares common morphological features of different slime mold groups. It would help present morphological terms used in later sections. Esculenta (talk) 01:37, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      • Another way to think of it: a newbie interested reader reading the article in its current state would finish without even really learning what a "sporangium" is, despite it being the prominent and interesting fruiting structure in several of the images. Seems like that content (and similar) is missing.
        • Added. The newbie should clearly not be confronted with enormous Latinate terms like "pseudocapillitium", this is not a morphology textbook.
  • There are several common lichen growth forms; are there similar growth forms that occur in this polyphyletic group? I see for example the dog vomit is sponge-like, Trichia varia is thick with tight berries, and at least one species has a sac-like sporangium. Esculenta (talk) 01:54, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    • Well they're very diverse. The characteristic form of many species is the stalked sporangium.
  • no section on distribution? One book I have (Myxomycetes A Handbook of Slime Molds (2000) has an entire chapter on this, and includes sections on snowbank species, high-latitude species, desert species, and taxa associated with various microhabitats, like bark, forest litter, dung, and soil.
    • Added.
  • another chapter in this book discusses slime mold ecology, which seems to be only sparingly referred to in this article. Topics include trophic stages, substrate relationships, fruiting season, insect associates, slime mold-eating fungi, relationships with bryophytes, etc.
    • Added some. Overall the article has grown by some 60% now.

More comments

  • the plasmodial strand speed record is held by Physarum polycephalum, not Fuligo septica as implied by the positioning of the text.
    • Added.
  • there's repetitive information in the "Cellular slime molds" and "Chemical signals" subsections
    • Edited.
  • should be mentioned that cyclic AMP is a common cell signalling compound found in all types of life forms (reader currently might otherwise get the impression it's a unique compound discovered in slime molds)
    • Glossed.
  • "An amino group (NH3) and a carboxyl group (COOH) of the glutamic acid are blocked respectively by a propionyl group and an ethyl ester. An amino group on the ornithine molecule is blocked by a lactam ring." This is material I don't think needs to be in this article; it's highly niche, and the ultimate physiological effect of the chemical blocking described isn't mentioned.
    • Removed.
  • What I think would be more interesting is a sentence or two about the diversity of acrasins. Only two are mentioned in this article; how many are known?
    • Added. Answer is not many; most remain unknown as of 2023.
  • I think this subsection should discuss chemotaxis somewhere (unusual that this article does not mention this word)
    • Added. I've been trying hard not to fill the article with polysyllabic Greek-based Latinates, of which there are plenty in this field.
  • as a small addition to "Chemical signals", it could be mentioned that "slime moulds release calcium while foraging and that calcium is attractive to other slime moulds" (as least regarding Physarum polycephalum), and that acellular slime molds release "stress" compounds that allow conspecifics to avoid the same area.
    • Added a sentence.
  • check out "slime mold algorithm" on Google Scholar – I think the attempted algorithmic application of slime mold behavior to try to solve real-world problems could be an interesting addition
    • Added.
  • are any slime molds used as model organisms?
    • Added.
  • image captions with just a linked species name are pretty bare-minimum; could be used in some instances to show their interesting common names, or reinforce a fact or term used in the article?
    • Added some, but the images' prime purpose is to show the group's diversity.
  • any examples of cultural use of slime mold as food? yes!
    • Added.
  • slime mold beetles are also a thing and I would like to learn what they are from this article please.
    • Added.

https://digitalcommons.unl.edu/plantpathpapers/366/ here

    • Added.
  • use of slime molds in research and teaching here
    • Added.

Impressive work! I think the article broadly satisfies criterion 3 now. Will have a fresh read and get back later with more comments. Esculenta (talk) 18:49, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:05, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies – have been unexpectedly busy of late. Will return for round 2 and wrap up review this weekend. Esculenta (talk) 20:54, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Even more comments

OK, we're close to wrapping this up!

  • the lead needs some expanding to cover the new prose additions
    • Added.
  • Images: all are appropriately licensed, but the following is a bit concerning:
  • File:1n+2nLC.gif looks suspiciously like a scan of a diagram from a textbook (if you look closeup at the hatching, it's clear it's been copied from elsewhere) and claimed as "own work" by a redlinked user, with no source given for the original. Not sure how far we can "AGF" here. Might there be a different life cycle diagram with more clear provenance?
  • Replaced image.
  • " George Willard Martin argued that the slime molds were a derived group of fungi." can we more simply say "argued that the slime molds evolved from fungi."?
    • Done.
  • "In 1969, the taxonomist R. H. Whittaker stated that the "slime molds stick out like a sore thumb" from the rest of the Fungi, to which they were at that time attached, and agreed to Lindsay S. Olive's reassignment of the Gymnomycota to the Protista." not sure if it's a good idea to quote a euphemism that non-native English readers might struggle to understand; how about "In 1969, taxonomist R. H. Whittaker observed that slime molds were highly conspicuous and distinct within the Fungi, the group to which they were then classified. He concurred with Lindsay S. Olive's proposal to reclassify the Gymnomycota, which includes slime molds, as part of the Protista."
    • Done.
  • how about adding these links: David Joseph Patterson, phylogenetic tree, environmental DNA, epiphyllous, cosmopolitan distribution, mating type, diploid (linked in caption, not in text), inbreeding, macrocyst, Constantine John Alexopoulos, immortalised cell line, culture, allele, nodes, Tokyo's rail system
    • Linked.
  • is it Didymium aquatile or aquatilis (given in the genus article)?
    • Fixed.
  • "Other P. polycephalum may contain different" -> "Other individuals of P. polycephalum"
    • Fixed.
  • there's some duplicative info about acrasins/cAMP in the "Cellular slime molds" and "Chemical signals" subsections
    • Fixed.
  • the citation police have unfortunately decided that the journal Food Science & Nutrition is unsuitable for use here; maybe this could be used as a partial replacement? If you can read Spanish (or plug into a translator), it seems to have a lot of other interesting ethnomycological information about uses of slime molds.
    • Aaargh, a serious and good paper gone west. Added something from the Spanish paper, feel free to add a bit more if you're in the mood for that.
  • I made some copyedits myself, but won't feel bad if you disagree with them and revert. Esculenta (talk) 18:33, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have reviewed the

GA criteria and believe that this article meets those criteria. Thanks for your efforts in improving this highly-viewed, vital article! Esculenta (talk) 22:01, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply
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