Talk:Somalis in Sweden
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- AadaamS
- (talk) 08:46, 22 October 2017 (UTC)]
- We should also provide context, not just numbers. The conclusions and reasoning from the Framitidskommissionen report should be used in the article, along with the info from Swedish Television and other sources. It is good to use SCB data when nothing else is available, but we have better sources in this case. talk) 08:46, 22 October 2017 (UTC)]
- A figure is never "outdated" if it is attached with a year, only if it is being described as current in the text. There is absolutely nothing in ENWP guidelines which say we cannot present figures from the past to provide the history or chronicle of a subject. Immigration from Somalia to Sweden has happened since the 90s, of course the article can describe figures from the past provided they are clearly labelled as such. We add new figures as they become available, but there is no reason to delete old figures. In fact, deleting accurately sourced and relevant information is not allowed according to ENWP guidelines. Sticking to only current figures violates talk) 08:55, 22 October 2017 (UTC)]
Actually, the Statistics Sweden latest official figures are contrasted with the governmental Framitidskommissionen's older figures; I didn't remove them. What I did do per
More sources
HELMI - Health & Migration report from
The government manages the official data, so it is the most reliable and up-to-date Swedish authority per
- talk) 21:53, 23 October 2017 (UTC)]
Context can also mean what actual professions and fields of education the individuals' pursue. Anyway, the government is a reliable authority on governmental data (see
- talk) 16:57, 24 October 2017 (UTC)]
Actually, per Statistics Sweden, as of 2008 the estimated unemployment rate for Somalia-born immigrants aged 25 to 54 was roughly 28% for males and 21% for females. That is not a majority but rather the contrary [7]. Anyway, per
- Raw data lends itself to a table format, I think your long recaputilation of tabular data is best presented as a table, but even a table does not capture trends or context. Which page are you looking at in your link? I am looking at page 51. One of the other sources I've read during our "conversation" indicate employment varied between 20-30% in 2000-2010, that's why I ask. Let's see if I can find that statistic again. talk) 18:17, 25 October 2017 (UTC)]
The employment rate and unemployment rate are two different things, and are calculated differently. The unemployment rates are on pages 58-61. Soupforone (talk) 04:01, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Alright, I've changed my statement above. talk) 05:54, 26 October 2017 (UTC)]
The bottom line is that the employment and unemployment rates need contextualization - particularly given the indicated caveat that "unemployment figures are based on Labour Force Surveys in which the informant can be both enrolled in education and unemployed, and due to this have higher unemployment rates." This cannot be adequately rendered into a table format. Soupforone (talk) 15:24, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- There word combination had attained appears 9 times in the Education paragraph, repetition is not good for readability. talk) 18:53, 26 October 2017 (UTC)]
The word "attained" is necessary to avoid sentence fragmentation (ex. 22% had attained an upper secondary education level // 22% an upper secondary education level). Without the term, it also looks like the individuals have left school when many are actually still in schooling. A table format could perhaps work, though, for the actual educational fields that they matriculated in. Soupforone (talk) 03:38, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
- It is necessary only because prose, in this case, is a format ill suited to the task. The sources from SCB are in this case using the table format and they are experts in these matters. If the source uses a table, it is not unreasonable that ENWP does. talk) 08:27, 29 October 2017 (UTC)]
The government educational level figures on pages 30-31 are actually presented in pie and bar charts [8]. This can be rendered in either chart, prose or table formats -
- Yes, a pie or bar chart could be used, or a table. There's a reason experts use those forms of presentation. talk) 15:03, 29 October 2017 (UTC)]
If the Nordic Somali Youth Summit files from Stockholm are somehow not relevant, then tabular employment and self-employment rates from North America are even less so. Anyway,
- A table is more clear in this case, that is why the academics used a table. There is no need to re-state talk) 06:37, 30 October 2017 (UTC)]
- Those are academics at talk) 06:55, 30 October 2017 (UTC)]
North America employment and self-employment figures from almost a decade ago are undue weight for a table format on Sweden employment and self-employment. Also, the policy issue is whether Wikipedia policy recommends presentation in the prose format or the table format.
- It's not undue weight because ...
- English Wikipeida is supposed to write from a global perspective, therefore the table provides the layman reader with an easy comparison to Somali migration elsewhere. Therefore only citing Swedish statistics is inappropriate when sources exist.
- There has to my knowledge been a more recent or larger report on employment. If there has, it is a useful source.
- the table is in the summary of the report, it is not in the appendix or some obscure subsection. The authors of the report has lent the table this weight. If it's good enough for academics writing the summary of a major report for the government, it is good enough for enwp too.
- It's comparison figures, there is clear ENWP policy and in this case it allows the same format preferred by experts on the topic. Referring to "mathematical figures" is misrepresenting the argument. It is not better presented as prose in this case because it's a table of comparison. There is no question that prose lends itself better to comparison, the numbers belong together as a whole. Splitting into sentences causes fragmentation and makes easy comparison harder to the layman reader (our intended audience). A table of comparison may not be better presented as prose to anyone.
- WP:OTHERSTUFF This is not the Immigration to Swedenarticle. Bringing up other article does not support anything in this talk page. If there are issues in that article, bring it up on the talk page of that article.
- The farmhosts image is more appropriate. talk) 18:19, 30 October 2017 (UTC)]
As it turns out, the original Swedish language description of the file doesn't indicate that the farm host youth are of Somali origin (oops, that darn WP:NONENG!). Anyway, the table is indeed undue weight. Template:Globalize pertains to global-themed pages that have a narrow focus on a specific country or area (ergo, why there are various sub-templates like Template:Globalize/Japan). This is actually the opposite of this embedded table, which instead pertains to a country-specific page. Also, I don't see how alluding to mathematical data is misrepresenting the argument since that is exactly what WP:WHENTABLE indicates comparative figures are. The only really valid argument that can perhaps be made is that the government bureau uses a table to present the figures, so this formatting should therefore be emulated. However, there are two problems with this-- (1) it places undue weight on very outdated Sweden figures as well as on non-Sweden figures, and (2) it ignores that most of the actual government discussion on the figures is presented in prose. Now, if you had suggested that the latest Sweden figures should be presented in table format, that would be more reasonable. Anyway, the employment and self-employment figures would have to be in prose since the factors governing them would make little sense without first explaining what those percentages actually are. That is what the prose policy means when it stipulates that prose allows for the presentation of detail and clarification of context. Soupforone (talk) 03:42, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- See point 3 under WP:RS.
- WP:PROSEagree that tables are appropriate for statistics and comparison figures.
- Of course employment and self-employment figures should be mentioned in prose, the table should not be standalone as per point 3 of WP:NOTSTATSBOOK. The prose can simply refer to the table and there is no need for tedious repetition.
- Those are academics placing weight on US & Canadian figures by placing them in the summary and writing an entire report about the comparison. That's why including them is due weight.
- They are not "outdated", they are accurate for their clearly labeled time period. ENWP policy explicitly states that recent figures should not be given higer weight as per WP:RECENTISM. On the contrary, having analysis on employment & education from the 90s is in every way relevant and according to policy.
- There seems to be an underlying assumption that merely putting numbers in a table lends these numbers undue weight. What is that assumption based on?
- Standalone and uncontextualised statistics in general, even when disguised as prose, are discouraged per point 3 of WP:NOTSTATSBOOK.
- talk) 12:14, 4 November 2017 (UTC)]
It is clear that paragraphs having several sentences only quoting comparative statistics of as prose hurts readability & comprehension, that's
The figures are indeed outdated (not merely old) because newer figures have been published.
They are only outdated if figures have been superseded, they have not. Standalone tables of the kind the sections are now cluttered with are nothing but statistic tables disguised as prose and in this case very poor prose. It doesn't flow, a reader has to read back to the first sentence over and over the paragraph to make any sense of it - it is a very reader-unfriendly format where a table is much better from very presentation perspective.
Well, according to the Institute of Labor Economics, the employment figure as of 2014 has indeed changed. You also appear to be confusing
A table format is more readable for this sort of comparisons in every way, that's why the academics chose the table for the summary. They did not prefer only prose even if you keep insisting on it even when readability clearly suffers. There seems to be a lot of confusion about the meanings of outdated and old and superseded.
WP:PROSE doesn't indicate that an embedded table format is more readable. It indicates that prose is usually preferable. Soupforone (talk) 04:46, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
This case is not one of the usually. There is a difference between usually and mandatory. It could well be the case that WP:PROSE is the only place in the world which considers prose more redable for a direct comparison of statistic figures produced by reknowned academics, in this it would be unique. Tables are recommended for clarity in these cases at least according to a few other documentation standards in the world.
World documentation standards (not sure what that means) have no bearing here; only actual wikipedia policy matters. That is,
They do indeed have meaning in the context of the word usually. For instance Oxford University Press on tables: "Tables are used to display information that is too complex to go into the main text or a list." Prose is inappropriate where a table is better for comparison. It is well within the guideline. Newspaper Arbetet uses a table too for this comparison. This is not one of the usually, then.
I've noted the current employment, employment population ratio and unemployment rates in the table. Per Template:Update, the older employment & self-employment figures alone (which include non-Sweden figures) are unsatisfactory. Soupforone (talk) 05:35, 19 November 2017 (UTC)
4269 figure
Statistics Sweden does not indicate on page 198 a 4,269 figure for native Somali-speaking students. The speaker figures are instead on pages 452, 455, 505 & 510, and they also don't indicate a 4,269 figure [9]. Soupforone (talk) 14:36, 29 October 2017 (UTC)
- The wrong link was supplied, this is the correct one: http://www.scb.se/statistik/_publikationer/UF0524_2009A01_BR_UF0109TAB.pdf. talk) 15:02, 29 October 2017 (UTC)]
- There is also a helpful tag for marking reasonable information attached with a source but which the source does not support: [talk) 02:54, 30 October 2017 (UTC)]
- There is also a helpful tag for marking reasonable information attached with a source but which the source does not support: [
Yup, it was the wrong url. Soupforone (talk) 04:22, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
- The first deletion was unexplained. talk) 06:41, 30 October 2017 (UTC)]
Per
There is no such thing as a ghost.
Good to know. Soupforone (talk) 03:42, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
Accuracy
The wikitext claim that "in 2007, it was estimated that 30% of Somali males in Sweden were using khat, a plant classed as a narcotic by Swedish authorities in 1989" is undue weight, outdated and inaccurate. It is linked to an Oxford paper, which on page 26 attributes this percentage to a 2007 paper by Anderson et al. ("Estimates suggest that khat is still chewed by 30% of Somali men in Sweden (Anderson et al., 2007)") [10]. However, Anderson et al. do not indicate this anywhere in their actual paper [11]. The Oxford publication also notes in its preamble that "the views expressed in this report are those of the authors, not necessarily those of the Home Office (nor do they reflect Government policy)." Further,
- No problem, but the figure was not unreasonable when other sources are taken into account. There are plenty of other references to widespread khat abuse in the Somali community. For instance page 9 katmissbruk är ett stort problem inom främst den somaliska gruppen i Göteborg by Gothenburg municipality. The relevant section starts on page 8. http://www.vartgoteborg.se/prod/sk/vargotnu.nsf/files/FranOrdTillHandling/$FILE/FranOrdTillHandling.pdf.
- Then there's Göteborgsposten in 2007: En kartläggning gjord i våras av två studenter på det folkhälsovetenskapliga programmet vid Sahlgrenska akademin visade att av 122 intervjuade göteborgare som var mellan 17 och 55 år och hade somalisk bakgrund, så hade en tredjedel testat kat och var tionde tuggade kat vid undersökningstillfället.
- Apparently Stockholm municipality has neglected to collect statistics: Det finns ingen statistik på hur många som tuggar kat i Stockholmsområdet. Men enligt mottagningen är drogen vardag för många, speciellt somalier i Rinkeby. Then again there's widespread smuggling at talk) 10:57, 9 December 2017 (UTC)]
- There's also a study from Gothenburg University, though I haven't taken the time to read it yet. There's also police study named Unga kriminella personer med somalisk bakgrund, but it was labelled secret and is not publicly available. Not good for the transparency ratings. talk) 11:14, 9 December 2017 (UTC)]
- And talk) 11:21, 9 December 2017 (UTC)]
- And
- There's also a study from Gothenburg University, though I haven't taken the time to read it yet. There's also police study named Unga kriminella personer med somalisk bakgrund, but it was labelled secret and is not publicly available. Not good for the transparency ratings.
The first url, which dates from almost 12 years ago, indicates that Somalis, Ethiopians, Yemenis and other Red Sea nationalities were the main chewers of khat in the city. The only place where it broaches actual usage rates is via anecdotal claims made by a portion of 31 interviewed persons. [12] The second and fourth urls are on a 2007 interview-based survey conducted by two Gothenburg University students (not the municipal government much less the national authorities), which found that 40 of the individuals had chewed khat at some point and 11 of the people indicated that they were using khat at the time [13]. That hardly equals widespread khat abuse. The last url notes that the main khat chewers were from nations in and around the Horn region, that khat smugglers only smuggle khat, that khat is generally unavailable to the Swedish public, as well as the market price for the plant as of 2015. It doesn't, however, indicate actual usage rates. The Bra bureau has a brief on khat but focuses instead on human smuggling, noting that primarily individuals from the Middle East are smuggled into Sweden according to criminal intelligence ("enligt kriminalunderrättelsetjänsten är det främst människor från Mellanöstern som smugglas in i Sverige i dag" [14]). Soupforone (talk) 17:04, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
The "Swedish public" is not the subject of this article. Since the irrelevant "12 years ago" arguments show up over and over again, why don't you try to have the
That is not particularly relevant since it's year specific. Please see TEMPLATE:Update. Soupforone (talk) 05:35, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
Chap
An anecdotal claim on the municipal funding of community organizations was attributed to an unidentified community leader. This is a personal opinion and as such is inappropriate per
Knife crime by youngsters
The lead section of the article says: Local police stated that unlike other criminals where the violence levels escalate along with the career in crime, Somalis use knife violence already as youngsters. This statement comes a 2007 newspaper report of an observation of a police investigator who said that she saw that knife violence in Somali youngsters happen in a young age. I think that a 12-year old article quoting an anecdotal report, without any statistical backing should NOT be present in the article, not the most in the lead section. --Netha (talk) 12:54, 13 June 2019 (UTC)
I agree, unfortunately it seems several of the Wikipedia articles about this minority has been hijacked the rightwing editors with a certain POV.
A deletion is well warranted. --BrownianMotionS (talk) 23:10, 12 September 2020 (UTC)
- I agree and the link is dead. Not to mention this content reeks of racism. I'm deleting it.VR talk 13:39, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
Explaining the revert
Per this edit by DoSazunielle and comment will remove unsourced statement while retaining other changes
: precisely the opposite happened: the statement which wasn't supported by the source was retained, while the information supported by the source (Brinkemo) were deleted. Therefore the edit was reverted. Do not revert without discussing first. A Thousand Words (talk) 16:35, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
- Somewhat confused. The paragraph reads: "When Somalis go to Sweden, they enter a country which has not experienced a major war in over two hundred years, a state apparatus stretching over a five-century time span, strong institutions, high-tech industry, an advanced knowledge-based economy with a generally high level of education. Sweden is also one of the most secularized societies with liberal values in areas that are central to traditional Somali culture: family, sexuality and gender. These circumstances combine to make a society which is radically different from that of Somalia." So you're saying that the last sentence ("radically different") is unsupported but the preceding two sentences are supported? Is there an ebook available of the source to verify? DoSazunielle (talk) 16:54, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, I must have misread the diffs from your last two edits. The statement which was unsupported by the source was indeed deleted, so I apologise for that. But the information which explained how the countries were different was deleted and replaced with
Swedish society is radically different from that of Somalia.
which does not explain how or why they are different. Therefore your edit was reverted perWP:PRESERVE. A Thousand Words (talk) 18:08, 12 October 2020 (UTC)]- Yes, I didn't have any doubt in the general statement that Somali and Swedish society are different, but in the specific differences listed. Hence my request if there's a digital copy of the source for verification, as the link appears to go to a Worldcat entry for a physical copy which for me is more difficult to obtain. (Of course, if you're unfamiliar with that source I can pursue other channels, but just thought I'd ask.) DoSazunielle (talk) 18:43, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
- The statement of the differences in the source (and the article) correspond to the major historic events of the two countries in modern times. No idea where you can obtain a copy of the source, sorry. A Thousand Words (talk) 00:56, 13 October 2020 (UTC)
- Yes, I didn't have any doubt in the general statement that Somali and Swedish society are different, but in the specific differences listed. Hence my request if there's a digital copy of the source for verification, as the link appears to go to a Worldcat entry for a physical copy which for me is more difficult to obtain. (Of course, if you're unfamiliar with that source I can pursue other channels, but just thought I'd ask.) DoSazunielle (talk) 18:43, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, I must have misread the diffs from your last two edits. The statement which was unsupported by the source was indeed deleted, so I apologise for that. But the information which explained how the countries were different was deleted and replaced with
Removing images of Somali Swedes
1Kwords removed an image of a Swedish Somali runner from the article saying "A single runner is a poor representative of Somalis in Sweden and also misrepresents Somalis as most aren't athletes. In a section about employment, a graph showing employment trends and figures would be more appropriate."
A graph about employment would be fine, but article about Somalis in Sweden should have pictures of famous Somalis. They also removed a picture of a Swedish Somali journalist. Articles about ethnic groups typically have images of its famous members, so I don't see the issue here.VR talk 17:17, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
- A better place for one of the images might be the Somalis in Sweden#Notable individuals section. Cordless Larry (talk) 19:35, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
- I'm open to different placement. But the problem is that 1Kwords has removed these images altogether. Also consider that sometimes such images are placed in the "Demograhics" section (e.g. British Cypriots#Demographics, a good article) or "History" section (e.g. Indian Americans#20th_century). This really shouldn't be controversial. 1Kwords removing positive examples of Somalis in Sweden, coupled with adding "unlike other criminals where the violence levels escalate along with the career in crime, Somalis use knife violence already as youngsters"[15] to this article is rather troubling.VR talk 02:35, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
- It is good that VR writes clearly that the images were intended as anecdotal "positive examples", whereas a section in an encyclopedia should primarily focus on providing an accurate overview. The images VR inserted weren't of community leaders of Somalis and thus do not "represent" Somalis in any meaningful sense. Which WP:RS source says the individuals depicted are "positive examples"? I agree that the images could be appropriate in the Notable individuals section. Would the NI section be considered POV if it only has "positive" examples?
- The section that VR is referring to about knife crime was sourced to a WP:RS (police in Sweden) and thus was accurate and neutral editing means we write what's accurate, regardless of whether it's positive or negative. A Thousand Words (talk) 06:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)]
- I restored the images, one is in the Notable individuals section and the other is in the Demographics section (which has ]
- Thank you, User:Vice regent. BTW I just now noticed another weird claim by the editor: the police in Sweden is a reliable source. It may be, for certain things in certain contexts--but it's still primary, and not necessarily neutral. Drmies (talk) 16:48, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- I restored the images, one is in the Notable individuals section and the other is in the Demographics section (which has ]
- I'm open to different placement. But the problem is that 1Kwords has removed these images altogether. Also consider that sometimes such images are placed in the "Demograhics" section (e.g. British Cypriots#Demographics, a good article) or "History" section (e.g. Indian Americans#20th_century). This really shouldn't be controversial. 1Kwords removing positive examples of Somalis in Sweden, coupled with adding "unlike other criminals where the violence levels escalate along with the career in crime, Somalis use knife violence already as youngsters"[15] to this article is rather troubling.VR talk 02:35, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
- I've moved the image from the demography to the community section, partly to space the images in the article out more evenly. Cordless Larry (talk) 22:11, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
- The journalist's name is a redlink and no given WP:RS source verifies that the journalist is, in fact, notable. Whether someone being employed as a journalist being positive or negative is up to a personal point of view. A Thousand Words (talk) 02:42, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
- A Thousand Words, you must not have looked very hard; Bilan Osman is now up in article space. And let me just remind the reader of this talk page that you are deflecting: the discussion began with an edit you made pertaining to Mustafa Mohamed. Drmies (talk) 17:29, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
- My previous post said no _given_ source and the WP:BURDEN of proof is on the editor who wishes to add material. Have a good day. A Thousand Words (talk) 19:29, 24 January 2021 (UTC)]
- My previous post said no _given_ source and the
- A Thousand Words, you must not have looked very hard; Bilan Osman is now up in article space. And let me just remind the reader of this talk page that you are deflecting: the discussion began with an edit you made pertaining to Mustafa Mohamed. Drmies (talk) 17:29, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
- The journalist's name is a redlink and no given WP:RS source verifies that the journalist is, in fact, notable. Whether someone being employed as a journalist being positive or negative is up to a personal point of view. A Thousand Words (talk) 02:42, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
Contributions from rightwing extremists such as 1Kwords
Dear Wikipedia readers and contributors
It has come to my knowledge that articles about ethnic minorities in the west are plagued by a small discrete minority of rightwing etremists who work in a very discrete manner to highlight negative aspects, such as adding crime-rate, tabloid POV articles as references, but also removing any positive aspects, while at the same time generalizing certain communities with negative information. These Wikipedia contributors represent a danger to the validity and objective standard that Wikipedia strives for. Notice how a particular user named 1KWords has specialized to bring exclusively negative information about Somali communities in Scandinavia. How can we prevent such users with their very particular POV?
I know I could be breaching certain Wiki rules by being so specific about another user, but this has gotten problematic. I would advise all readers and administrators to check out the contributions of 1KWords / also known as A Thousand Words, they are sinister and specialised.
BrownianMotionS (talk) 16:30, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
1Kwords negative content removal
As per other articles, I suggest the whole employment section gets removed. The user who made the section recently got blocked from editing as he was known for portraying immigrants in a negative way.MacrobianPrince (talk) 21:01, 13 December 2021 (UTC)