Talk:Sunday Morning (No Doubt song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:05, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:

Lead

• recorded by the American -> recorded by American

•  Done

• available as -> available as a

•  Done

• cassette single, and -> cassette single and

• It's a serial comma–commonly used in American English

• 1997 by -> 1997 through

•  Done

• the breakup -> their breakup

•  Done

• The song was written -> you've already used "song"

•  Done

• with one calling -> with one of them calling

•  Done

• peaking in the -> peaking within the

•  Done

• certified gold -> certified Gold

• Gold does not need to be capitalized

Background and recording

• Young, and musician -> Young and musician

• Serial comma

• Who is Angle

• Gary Angle proceeds the sentence

• officials, and had -> officials and had

• Serial comma

• band, and -> band and

• Serial comma

• when he did -> when he did so

•  Done

• more and more songs -> several songs

•  Done

• then his girlfriend -> his then-girlfriend

Composition

• Flawless

Critical reception

• Bleach from his -> Bleach, writing for
• blog also enjoyed -> blog, also enjoyed
• single... From -> single. [...] From

Commercial performance

• successful, charting -> successful, with it charting
• US -> United States
• Try to not use "song" every time
• certified gold -> certified Gold

• Like I said, this would be incorrect

• at positions -> at number
• well, peaking -> well, with it peaking
• the UK -> the United Kingdom
• and number -> and at number

Music video

• The song's music video -> An accompanying music video for the song
• Remove "sometime"
• band, after -> band, following
• video opens -> video commences
• ex-lover (Terry Hall) walks -> ex-lover, Terry Hall, walks

• Terry Halls plays the lover, he isn't the actual lover though. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• with the ex-lover -> with Hall

• Same as above. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

• Credits and personnel adapted from the Tragic Kingdom liner notes. -> Credits adapted from the liner notes of Tragic Kingdom
• cover art -> photography

Release history

• Unlink formats and label

• Outcome: On hold for 7 days. Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:48, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• @Cartoon network freak: I have changed the article accordingly; thanks a ton! Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• @Carbrera: Passing article. Congratulations! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:33, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]