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Sunday Morning (No Doubt song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 10, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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This article states: "After rinsing her finger Stefani says 'now you're looking like I used to' while Tony Kanal is cleaning the tomato sauce off the floor. This is most likely a reference to one of Stefani's teenage job of scrubbing floors at Dairy Queen." Doubt(ful), the lyrics are about a woman who once was infatuated with a man who perhaps was not as infatuated with her, but while she has since gotten over him, he is not over her, so the table are turned and "now you're looking like I used to." The former boyfriend hanging around during the video, ignored by Stefani, would seem to bear this out. In any case, this and the article's interpretation are clearly original research, unless the article's writer has some reference to suggest the dairy queen interpretation was either the director's or band's intent. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.1.168.113 (talk) 15:48, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:05, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:

Lead

recorded by the American -> recorded by American

Done

available as -> available as a

Done

cassette single, and -> cassette single and

It's a serial comma–commonly used in American English

1997 by -> 1997 through

Done

the breakup -> their breakup

Done

The song was written -> you've already used "song"

Done

with one calling -> with one of them calling

Done

peaking in the -> peaking within the

Done

certified gold -> certified Gold

Gold does not need to be capitalized

Background and recording

Young, and musician -> Young and musician

Serial comma

Who is Angle

Gary Angle proceeds the sentence

officials, and had -> officials and had

Serial comma

band, and -> band and

Serial comma

when he did -> when he did so

Done

more and more songs -> several songs

Done

then his girlfriend -> his then-girlfriend

Composition

Flawless

Critical reception

Bleach from his -> Bleach, writing for
blog also enjoyed -> blog, also enjoyed
single... From -> single. [...] From

Commercial performance

successful, charting -> successful, with it charting
US -> United States
Try to not use "song" every time
certified gold -> certified Gold

Like I said, this would be incorrect

at positions -> at number
well, peaking -> well, with it peaking
the UK -> the United Kingdom
and number -> and at number

Music video

The song's music video -> An accompanying music video for the song
Remove "sometime"
band, after -> band, following
video opens -> video commences
ex-lover (Terry Hall) walks -> ex-lover, Terry Hall, walks

Terry Halls plays the lover, he isn't the actual lover though. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

with the ex-lover -> with Hall

Same as above. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

Credits and personnel adapted from the Tragic Kingdom liner notes. -> Credits adapted from the liner notes of Tragic Kingdom
cover art -> photography

Release history

Unlink formats and label

Outcome: On hold for 7 days. Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:48, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: I have changed the article accordingly; thanks a ton! Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: Passing article. Congratulations! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:33, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.