Talk:The Earth Is Not a Cold Dead Place

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:52, 30 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• "Forming in Austin, Texas in" I don't like this, you mean the band formed in 1999? And comma after Texas. Or you could say "After forming..."?

• Addressed. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Lead is brief. Anything about the style of the album or the critical/sales reception?

• Addressed. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Producer is noted in the infobox but he is not referred to as producer in the article itself?

• Added to article body. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• "formed in 1999 in Austin, Texas, forming" formed ... forming.

• Removed. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• "All the tracks on The Earth Is Not a Cold Dead Place do not have" -> "None of the tracks .... have ..."

• Changed. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• "2000 - the " en-dash, not hyphen.

• Changed. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• "scholars of post-September 11 music Fisher and Flota" I'm not sure I understand, are these people? Do they have first names? Does "September 11 music" mean stuff related to 9/11 or just any music anywhere recorded after 9/11?

• Added first names. Changed to "September 11-related music". Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• "times... and" non-breaking space before the ellipsis.

• Added. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Check online source titles, no spaced hyphens -> spaced en-dashes please. And same comment on ellipsis applies there too.

• Added en dashes. Ellipsis not added because not in original title. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Where is "Bella Union BELLACD55" referenced?

• Removed. Roniius^{talk to me} 15:40, 5 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:47, 4 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]