Talk:The Imitation Game/GA1

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• The "short description" should go above everything else per
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• The talk page says the article is written in British English so add that template.
• The link for the BBFC reference had changed and should be updated.
• That same reference should also not be in
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• The second reference the "country" parameter should be properly cited and marked as dead.
• Future sections name this a British film, so shouldn't that be mentioned in the infobox?
• The budget reference is missing several parameters.
• The Box Office Mojo source should go to the summary, not the domestic gross.
• I would also recommend using the "cite Box Office Mojo" template.
• The lead should summarize the entire article and is currently missing any mention of #Production.
• For some reason
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• "cryptanalyst Alan Turing" → "cryptanalyst Turing" (already mentioned)
• The lead should also include a link to the awards list.

Plot and cast

• The plot section is under 700 words so that passes
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• Add a serial comma after Keith Furman.
• "The team are" → "The team is"
• Remove the comma after "intercept the messages".
• No issues with the cast section.

Production

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Music

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Release

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Reception

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Social action

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Controversy

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Historical inaccuracies

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Accolades

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References

• Archive sources.
• Why are so many references missing authors, dates, access dates, and websites?
• WhatCulture is not a reliable source and should not be used.
• Same issues with New York Post and Daily Express, so remove their uses per
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 Working

Progress

here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( lists ): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism ): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have suitable captions ):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

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  talk) 23:37, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply
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  Hi, thanks for the feedback. I thought the article would be eligible for GA nomination as the WikiProjects had it ranked at B-class. Isi96 (talk) 00:51, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]