Talk:There Goes My Baby (Usher song)

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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
March 26, 2010Articles for deletionRedirected
November 28, 2010Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathanTalk2Me 04:22, 22 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • The song was later -> repetitive, try "it"
Done.
  • While reaching a peak of twenty-five on the Billboard Hot 100, the song topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs -> doesn't read like a complete sentence. Should consider merging.
Done
  • favored the clip -> its not a clip, its a complete video
Done. Candyo32

Composition

  • was warmly received -> the song or his use of his falsetto range?
Falsetto range. I think the current wording world imply that as the falsetto range mentioning comes after the song.

Chart performance

  • solely from digital downloads as a promo single -> awkward
Done
  • since the inception of the chart -> what year is that?
The year is not given in the source. It only says "inception."
  • a feat not matched since his Confessions era -> a feat no one matched? or just him?
By him, changed.

Music video

  • screenshot -> too risque to include in the article :P lol
Confused at what you are getting at lol.
  • while he stands in a field and the sun rises in the background -> an the sun should be re-worded
Done.

Live performances

  • You write "performed" like 6 times. I know its tricky, but try and mix it up.
Done. Candyo32 20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]