Talk:This Will Be the Death of Us

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 18:44, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

• Needs alt
• New Found Glory's tour bus → not mentioned in the body of the article and missing source

Lead

• reception from critics → reception from some critics

Background

• On August 18, → year?

Production

• Wikilnk demoing
• Green tracked additional guitars on "Summer Jam"; → what do you mean?
• Recording concluded → The recording process concluded
• March → March 2009

Composition

• bands Bad Religion and All.→ bands such as Bad Religion and All.

Release

• In late March → year?
• On March 24, it was announced that the band had signed to Epitaph Records. → second sentence sentence
• On May 28, This Will Be the Death of Us was announced for release in July → so they announced in March and Mat it would be released in July?
• During the tour, "The Lost Boys" → During the tour, the japanese bonus track, "The Lost Boys"

Reception

• the Billboard 200 → the US Billboard 200
• The album received postive reviews from some music critics (add the sentence before all the reviews)

Track listing

• Is the booklet from the Japanese bonus track?

Personnel

• Fine

Charts

• Fine

References

• Fine

Overall

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:10, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done.

talk) 16:42, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply

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You forgot something. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:55, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed.

talk) 21:03, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply

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