Talk:Welcome to the Universe Tour

Welcome to the Universe Tour has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 6, 2014. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Welcome to the Universe Tour appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 9 March 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that during their Welcome to the Universe Tour, Thirty Seconds to Mars developed strategies that minimized fuel consumption of all touring vehicles? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2014/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Welcome to the Universe Tour.

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:39, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• "$2Bill tour. It began on ..." you mean the WTTUT began, not the $2Bill tour began, but this is confusing.

Fixed.

• "a green tour", consider linking green appropriately.

Linked to Environmentalism.

• [Fair use of image checks out fine.]
• "Thirty Seconds to Mars second studio" missing apostrophe.

Fixed.

• "..and commenced ... and ended..." bit too much run-on for my liking in this sentence.

Fixed.

• "A limited amount of tickets..." -> "limited number of tickets"

Fixed.

• "that would minimized" no d required.

Fixed.

• "tour as," not sure that should be a comma, perhaps a colon.

Fixed.

• "positive review ... positive review" a little repetitive.

Fixed.

• Representative set list isn't referenced.

Added a source.

• [I added col scopes per
  MOS:DTT
  .]
• Not convinced you really need that huge rowspan column for United States when all dates were in the United States.

I would leave it per convention.

• I'm not familiar with several of the sources, what makes "rockdirt.com" a RS? "livewire"?

Those sources are commonly used on Wikipedia, see

WP:NEWSBLOG

.

Not bad at all, will place on hold for a week pending changes/responses to above. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:34, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments, The Rambling Man.--Earthh (talk) 22:27, 5 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, no problem. I linked the journal for the new reference you provided, but I'm satisfied with the article now. Good work. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:10, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you :) Earthh (talk) 13:08, 6 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]