Template:Did you know nominations/Abhilasha Kumari
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:18, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
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Abhilasha Kumari
- ... that Abhilasha Kumari, the first female Chief Justice of Manipur High Court of India, served only for thirteen days?
- Reviewed: Akshay Nanavati
Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 05:34, 17 September 2018 (UTC).
- reviewing Whispyhistory (talk) 18:56, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
copyvio ok, character count ok, new enough, tweaked a little prose. Hook is in article and sourced with mixture of English and non-English sources. QPQ required. "she" is repeated too many times in article...consider rewording them. Maybe consider shortening hook. Otherwise ok. Whispyhistory (talk) 04:12, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking up the review. I have removed few "She" but it is bit difficult to write without it. QPQ done. ALT hook is here removing reference to first female chief justice:
- ALT1: ... that Abhilasha Kumari served as the Chief Justice of Manipur High Court only for thirteen days?
Both hooks ok. Thank you. Hook reference is in English. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:37, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
