Template:Did you know nominations/Alex Sharp

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:19, 29 July 2015 (UTC)

Alex Sharp

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... ~~that Alex Sharp became the youngest person to win the Tony Award for Best Actor in a Play at the 69th Tony Awards~~?

Reviewed: Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Delhi MLAs (5th of 12 QPQs)

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talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk

) at 23:50, 9 June 2015 (UTC).

Please note that I have noted our desperate need for a citation for this fact at
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Would
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) 00:10, 10 June 2015 (UTC)

I am unable to confirm if this is a
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EricEnfermero and TonyTheTiger: Metro would not count as a RS. It is a tabloid newspaper of poor repute in the same family as the Daily Mail. However here is an alternative which specifies that he was the youngest winner in that category. [[1]] Cowlibob (talk

) 21:54, 24 June 2015 (UTC)

Thx.--

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Tony, there are too many "Tonys" in the hook :) Can you leave off the 69th Tony Awards? Yoninah (talk) 00:34, 2 July 2015 (UTC)

(ALT1) ... that WP:WAWARD
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(ALT2) ... that WP:WAWARD
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I prefer ALT1 to ALT2.--
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Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

Dates are good, length is fine, citations are plentiful, the hook fact is fun, factual, and directly cited with a reliable source. (I have a strong preference for the brevity of ALT2.) Tone is neutral and grammar is solid but there are instances of close paraphrasing that must be corrected before this can pass. - Dravecky (talk) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

Source: "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."[2]

Article: "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."

Source: "Making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."[3]

Article: "[...] making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."

Source: "Sharp was born in London, and spent the first seven years of his life traveling with his family around the US. [...] Later the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan. "[4]

Article: "Sharp's family traveled around the U.S. for the first seven years of his life. Later, the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan."

Source: "Sharp always wanted to be an actor: his first role, aged 7, was as Piglet in Winnie-The-Pooh."[5]

Article: "Sharp always wanted to be an actor. At age 7, he made his acting debut as Piglet in Winnie-the-Pooh."

There are more examples but this sampling illustrates the nature of the issue. - Dravecky (talk) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)

A lot of the text was added by another user. I will have to review those edits.--
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It seems like your complaints are related to these edits by
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) 00:54, 29 July 2015 (UTC)

I have tried to address your concerns.--
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) 03:08, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
Okay, that clears up the vast majority of my verbiage concerns. (There are a few word choices we could debate, but that's for some other occasion.) Still a strong preference for ALT2 and I've struck the main hook as it's potentially slightly misleading. - Dravecky (talk) 03:59, 29 July 2015 (UTC)

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