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The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by Serial Number 54129 talk 17:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Claire Guichard

Created by Moondragon21 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:12, 23 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Claire Guichard; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • @Moondragon21: Based on DYKcheck: prose size fulfills criteria (2569 characters), article is recent enough. Suggest changing future to current in the hook.
    Suggestion
    ALT1:... that parliament member Claire Guichard once played in the miniseries Entre terre et mer? Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 23:51, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  • @Moondragon21: Multiple short, uncited paragraphs in the Political career section need citations before this can be approved. ALT1 hook fact does not check out in supplied source. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:56, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
  • @Z1720: The citations have been added to the paragraph but I am not sure how to rewrite the ALT0. Moondragon21 (talk) 18:25, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

@Sammi Brie: Either of these alts approved? Is there anything else that needs to be done to get this approved? Z1720 (talk) 18:29, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Review: Well, I came to review but hold on. So the only hook to survive the 15:46, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
@Serial Number 54129: Given that this has been stuck for a while, I'm giving a stab at a hook that combines ALT1's fact and the Gabriel angle since there's a concern about the hook being "a hook about doing her job".
ALT2 ... that Claire Guichard, who replaced Gabriel Attal in the latter's seat after he was appointed Prime Minister of France, was an actress before entering politics?
I understand that she wasn't really an actress in her previous career, but I guess it still makes it hookier? I'm not sure if the other article issues have been resolved yet, but maybe this would help move the nomination along? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:10, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Striking ALT1 and ALT2 as factually inaccurate per [1] and all variants of ALT0 as boring (she was always going to replace someone as PM).--Launchballer 13:27, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
@Launchballer: Regrettably I would recommend that the nomination be marked for closure as there doesn't seem to be anything else that's hooky in the article so far. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 17:15, 22 March 2024 (UTC)