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Den Frie Udstilling

• ... that the first exhibition of Den Frie Udstilling (pictured) featured artists such as Peder Severin Krøyer and Kristian Zahrtmann who were among the greatest painters of the period?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Teresa Gil de Vidaure

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 06:02, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

• New: Good. Length: Good. Policy: This is largely a translation, so I'm assuming good faith. Hook: Length is good, but declaring the painters to be the greatest of their period reeks of a neutrality violation. Also, the period in question was never specified. Could we rephrase the hook a bit? Abyssal (talk) 19:31, 19 February 2013 (UTC)

• Thanks for your review. Ipigott suggested some alts:

ALT1

• ... that the first exhibition of Den Frie Udstilling (pictured) in 1891 featured P.S. Krøyer and Kristian Zahrtmann who were among Denmark's most notable painters at the time?

ALT2

• ... that the first exhibition of Den Frie Udstilling (pictured) in 1891 featured several notable painters including P.S. Krøyer and Kristian Zahrtmann?

--Rosiestep (talk) 18:20, 24 February 2013 (UTC)

Alt 2 is fine. Abyssal (talk) 19:09, 26 February 2013 (UTC)