Template:Did you know nominations/Elizabeth Wright Ingraham
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:03, 7 March 2019 (UTC)
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Elizabeth Wright Ingraham
... that Elizabeth Wright Ingraham, designer of about 150 buildings in Colorado Springs, began studying architecture at the studio of her grandfather, Frank Lloyd Wright, when she was 15?Source: "Elizabeth Wright Ingraham, architect for about 150 buildings in Colorado Springs, her home for 65 years" (Colorado Springs Gazette); "She studied architecture with her grandfather at Taliesin in 1937" (Virginia Heritage)
5x expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 23:32, 19 February 2019 (UTC).
looks straight forward, expanded 5*, QPQ done, reads well, hook cited, enough sources, copyvio ok. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:44, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
- @Whispyhistory: I wonder if this is a better hook:
- ALT1: ... that Colorado Springs architect Elizabeth Wright Ingraham incorporated natural light into her designs, outfitting one home with a 100-foot (30 m) high skylight? Source: "It features a 100-foot skylight – Ingraham inherited her grandfather's passion for natural light" (The Denver Post) Yoninah (talk) 19:14, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
- yes @Yoninah:...sounds better. Hook is in source and followed by inline citation leading to appropriate source. Approving ALT1. Whispyhistory (talk) 06:45, 21 February 2019 (UTC)
