Template:Did you know nominations/Erica Deichmann Gregg
<
Template:Did you know nominations
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 15:06, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
| DYK toolbox |
|---|
Erica Deichmann Gregg
- ... that Erica Deichmann created over 5,000 glazes for Deichmann pottery?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Cryptostroma corticale
- Comment: For WikiProject Women in Red's Art+Feminism editathon.
Created by HazelAB (talk). Self-nominated at 00:14, 12 March 2016 (UTC).
Interesting bio, on good sources, thank you! Offline sources accepted AGF. I am not familiar with pottery (nor are our readers), so I can't judge if "formulated" glazes is the same as "invented" glazes (article), and that the same as "created" glazes (source). I think you could use "created", - or find a link for "formulated" that explains it. Or a completely different hook. Born in Denmark, Wisconsin, grown up in Denmark, is quite funny. - I wonder if Erica Deichmann Gregg is a good article name, - as an artist she was Erica Deichmann, no? That should show in the hook, by moving the article, or at least a pipe link. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:10, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Thanks for the feedback. I've changed the verb to "created" and made a pipe link as you suggested. Please let me know if there's anything else. All the best, HazelAB (talk) 18:40, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:12, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
