Template:Did you know nominations/Loltyler1
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:07, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
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Loltyler1
... thatLoltyler1 also played football in college? Source: (CMU Eagles)- ALT1:
... that after being banned from playingTwitch.tv? Source: "382,000 people tune in to watch the return of notoriously toxic LoL player .... Tyler1 just set a new Twitch record for an individual streamer ... In fact, Twitch just confirmed that Tyler1's return stream has set a new record for most concurrent viewers on an individual's channel. " (PC Gamer)
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- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Horatio Seymour presidential campaign, 1868
- Comment: Alternate hooks accepted.
Created by talk) at 13:48, 5 September 2018 (UTC).
- I think the hook fails DYK rule 3a, "interesting to a broad audience." The ALT1 is a lot more interesting to a broad audience. As for ALT1, I think the grammar needs to be improved. How about
- ALT2 "... that after his ban from playing talk) 17:14, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
- Fixed. ✉ • ✎) 18:15, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
- This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Approving ALT2, and I have struck the other hooks. A QPQ review is ongoing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:42, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
- Fixed.