User talk:128.197.73.86

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Richard M. Thorne
(July 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:
This submission does not appear to be written in
peacock terms
that promote the subject.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
This still reads like a CV / resume profile. Needs more sources external to the school. Clean up peacock verbiage such as "some of the most significant research contributions", or attribute it to others talking about his work.
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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 18:56, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Hello, 128.197.73.86! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 18:56, 19 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard M. Thorne has been accepted

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to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. You may wish to consider registering an account so you can create articles yourself.

Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!

StarryGrandma (talk) 23:23, 22 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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