User talk:BlueMoonset/Archive 11
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RfA
Hi BlueMoonset, I was wondering if you were still uninterested in adminship - seeing only one queue loaded and all the prep areas full reminded me of how useful it would be to have another DYK admin around, and I thought you were pretty much the best candidate for the job. If you have changed your mind, I would be delighted to nominate you at RfA.--Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 16:55, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
- Gilderien, thanks again, but I haven't changed my mind. Indeed, I'm very pressed for time for at least the next two to three weeks, and won't be on Wikipedia very much at all. I've barely got 100 edits and the month is already over a quarter over! I'll let others try for adminship. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:11, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
- Vote me in as bureaucrat and I'll just check the box, no questions asked. Seriously, I know you in a somewhat limited capacity, but it seems to me you're shoe-in for the job; I find it hard to imagine you'd be an unhelpful asshole outside of DYK. Speaking of which, when you have a moment, Template:Did you know nominations/Out of the Grey (The Dream Syndicate album) is languishing a bit. Thanks, and good luck with real life, Drmies (talk) 22:12, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
Opinion
Could you opine on this matter? Regards — Robin (talk) 13:57, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
- Robin, I'm a bit pressed for time, and attempting to determine the reliability of a source I've never previously encountered is not something I can undertake right now. Apologies. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:38, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
- I understand. Thanks for taking the time to respond. — Robin (talk) 00:56, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
- Sorry about that. I should have read more intently :/ — Robin (talk) 02:03, 11 May 2013 (UTC)
- Not a problem. It's not the world's best sentence, but I did slightly revise it before removing Blaine the first time: I didn't want to reiterate "couple" or add a synonym like "pair" or "twosome", so I tried to make the antecedent clearer by deleting a word. It would have looked very much like a straight restoration... BlueMoonset (talk) 02:19, 11 May 2013 (UTC)
DYK for Wonder-ful
nominate ) 08:04, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
DYK for All or Nothing (Glee)
Casliber (talk · contribs) 07:01, 12 May 2013 (UTC) redlinksI noted with interest your rv of a recent edit of mine wherein you entered the summary "The actor is not sufficiently notable to warrant a red link, or likely to be so." You seem to miss the point here. Any internal link serves to inform a reader that there is further information on something elsewhere on WP. Nothing has to be "notable" to 'deserve' a link here, the very existence of a term/name/item which a reader might wish to know more about and which is not self-evident from context or 'common knowledge' may be linked. The fact that there may not currently be a target for that link (ie, an article) is not directly relevant. It is, however, very useful when investigating the creation of an article at a later date because it enables the use of What links here to find other articles where further knowledge about that item/name/term is desired. In this particular case the individual may well not be likely to get a full article at the present time (there are, for example, only two inbound article links) but it may change in the future, and it is not for either of us to pre-determine that. --AlisonW (talk) 16:52, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
Will try to return to the review soon. Thanks for bringing into notice that edits were done in the article.--Dwaipayan (talk) 03:51, 31 May 2013 (UTC) Scheduling considerationWe have merged 12 new articles into a total of 6 hooks to avoid hook congestion. With only 6 hooks would you reconsider your WP:FOUR ) 15:48, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
Languishing DYK nominationHi BlueMoonset, can you have a look at Template_talk:Did_you_know#Articles_created.2Fexpanded_on_May_14? Poor old Writ Keeper's nomination seems to have been forgotten. I can't really take care of it since I've edited the article, but I think it should be unproblematic. Thanks! Drmies (talk) 04:36, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
HollidayHey, BlueMoonset. As I've finished expanding the Holly Holliday article, I was wondering/hoping if you could read trough it and polish where you see fit. Regards — Robin (talk) 20:41, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
Template:Did you know nominations/Lauren WardPlease reevaluate WP:FOUR ) 15:54, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
DYKDYK this when you posted? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:28, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
Howland Cultural CenterHi BlueMoonset, sorry to bother you but if you get the chance could you have a quick look at SagaciousPhil - Chat 16:53, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Template:Did you know nominations/Dia dos NamoradosPlease reconsider WP:FOUR ) 16:32, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
Hands All OverThanks for fixing that.[1] I didn't have time to do that last night and thought I'd leave it till today but you beat me to it. Gatoclass (talk) 08:46, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
Hi! Can you review the first hook if the ALT 1 is not good enough? If the first one is ok then it can go with that hook? Thanks. --Zayeem (talk) 10:03, 26 June 2013 (UTC) RequestI was wondering if you could possibly comment at Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of songs in Glee (season 1)/archive1. Robin (talk) 22:13, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Blue, I think this article is ready for final review. The sourcing (My only remaining concern) is acceptable to one and likely two other editors, but they did not affix the "tick". The nomination has been there for the better part of a month, and I'm sure the author (who I don't know other than interaction on this nom) would appreciate a determination. Thanks for your consideration, Kablammo (talk ) 14:42, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
DYK prep thanksThanks for cleaning up my mess; I noticed almost all the DYK queues were empty so tried to build one for the very first time. I hope I didn't F--k up too badly. Any future tips much appreciated... Montanabw(talk) 21:51, 27 June 2013 (UTC) AnatomyThe article Anatomy has recently been expanded and I have nominated it for DYK here. Please could you adjudicate as to whether it is a fivefold expansion. Thanks. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
Template DataHey BlueMoonset I'm sending you this because you've made quite a few edits to the template namespace in the past couple of months. If I've got this wrong, or if I haven't but you're not interested in my request, don't worry; this is the only notice I'm sending out on the subject :). So, as you know (or should know - we sent out a centralnotice and several watchlist notices) we're planning to deploy the VisualEditor on Monday, 1 July, as the default editor. For those of us who prefer markup editing, fear not; we'll still be able to use the markup editor, which isn't going anywhere. What's important here, though, is that the VisualEditor features an interactive template inspector; you click an icon on a template and it shows you the parameters, the contents of those fields, and human-readable parameter names, along with descriptions of what each parameter does. Personally, I find this pretty awesome, and from Monday it's going to be heavily used, since, as said, the VisualEditor will become the default. The thing that generates the human-readable names and descriptions is a small list of prominent templates, although I suspect we can all hazard a guess as to high-profile templates that would benefit from this. Hopefully you're willing to give it a try; the more TemplateData sections get added, the better the interface can be. If you run into any problems, drop a note on the Feedback page.
Thanks, Okeyes (WMF) (talk) 21:45, 28 June 2013 (UTC) Glee Character ChartHello! I understand your reasoning, however I don't think your reasoning is sufficient enough to delete the entire chart. The chart would help give a visual to show the changing in Character status throughout the series. Charts like this are in many different Television series pages and it is highly challenging to find specific information on this specific page. It is also very rude to delete the entire chart instead of altering it to your standards, such as simply deleting the Season 5 changes as you do not find the multiple reports to be credible. So, next time when making decisions like this, be considerate of other people's work and next time alter the work to your liking. Just because you don't find visual aids helpful does not mean that others do not. Signed, Person Whose Work You Deleted — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.12.112.123 (talk) 01:29, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
thanks!thanks for correcting the placement of my DYK nomination! i even read the name of the heading stating it was for articles created/expanded on that particular day, honest! i just wasn't thinking, i guess — this is my first nomination. anyway, thanks again! ~ Boomur [talk] 01:43, 4 July 2013 (UTC)
Help (yet again!)Hi BlueMoonset, as I noticed you are about at the moment, could you have a look at the new nomination on 5 July for RV/MH Hall of Fame? I was just about to put my review comments on it but the template doesn't seem to be right? I have left a brief note on SagaciousPhil - Chat 15:03, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
I'm guessing that this DYK can be closedThe creator nominated the article on the 2nd day and then posted on the 4th day that expansion will done within the next few days. It is now the 8th day and the article is still a stub. It is not alright to nominate an article for DYK in order to hold its place so that it can be expanded after the 5 day deadline. Template:Did you know nominations/Wa alaykumu s-salam. SL93 (talk) 18:07, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
DYKSince you have nothing better to do than criticize other people's DYK reviews, especially mine, I won't be doing any more. Maybe you should approve some noms yourself. PumpkinSky talk 19:36, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
Cycle rateI thought you were going to change the cycle rate from 3 sets per day to two? There seemed to be consensus for that solution, have you changed your mind about it now? Gatoclass (talk) 12:26, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
Hook rewordingThe end of the hook for Priyanka Chopra in prep area 3 is a problem because the last link ends with a question mark - "...that Priyanka Chopra is the first actress in the world to portray 12 distinct characters in one film which was What's Your Raashee??". I can't think of a good rewording. SL93 (talk) 03:08, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
I was wondering if you could help with something else. There is a DYK nomination for St Peter's Church, Ropsley. It seems like there should be St. instead of St like usual. I nominated the article for DYK so I will change the article name, change the hook, and change St to St. within the article if needed. SL93 (talk) 03:57, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
DYKI said that a nominator's articles have close paraphrasing. The nominator said that it isn't close paraphrasing, despite my examples, and tried bossing me on my talk page into removing the close paraphrasing tags from his articles. I was wondering if you had any insight into the discussion at Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Editor closely paraphrases sources. SL93 (talk) 15:44, 9 July 2013 (UTC) HooksI disagree about it being in very bad form, but there is no use in debating because there are better things to do on Wikipedia. I am curious as to why my section on the DYK talk page about promoted articles with close paraphrasing never had a response from anyone. I'm wondering if it is because prior nominations that were promoted with close paraphrasing can't be changed. Previous promoted articles with such problems will repeat themselves in future articles by those nominators if not resolved now. I was hoping that someone would post after the nominator started demanding me to remove the close paraphrasing tags with a section titled "Some work for you!" and my problems being called crap by that same editor. SL93 (talk) 23:19, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
Bio hooksJust for the record, I was aware there were two bio hooks together in prep 3 (now in Queue 3), but I felt the update needed a short hook amongst the first three as the first two hooks have multiple clauses, and in this case I felt having two bio hooks together as a result was the lesser of two evils. It's not always possible to get the ideal update, and an occasional juxtaposition of bio hooks doesn't do much harm. Incidentally, I noticed that many of the currently approved hooks at T:TDYK are bios, so thought it would be a good idea to get rid of an extra one in that set lest we end up with an update full of bios later on. Gatoclass (talk) 16:52, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Promoting lead hooksI thought about it and I will take your advice. I was going to respond earlier, but I had to deal with a vandal (indef blocked, talk page access revoked) for around 3 hours. SL93 (talk) 23:21, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Copy editingDo you know if there is a mentoring program on Wikipedia that specifically helps with how to correctly paraphrase articles in a formal manner? My writing was said to be worse than an 8th grader's. Apparently, my teachers during throughout high school and during my short time in college did not know what they were talking about. Either that or they just didn't care. The high school teachers not caring does make sense though. The graduation rate was low and the majority of students in my graduating class had only the bare minimum of credits. I had a B average in high school and I was one of the top students in my graduating class which is absolutely ridiculous. SL93 (talk) 18:32, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
I reviewed the article since my original comment with the tick was not an actual review (I shouldn't have misused it when I made one comment). There are two issues and one possible issue. SL93 (talk) 01:45, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Template:Did you know nominations/Brattata, Jet Pilot, and Okay Hot-ShotWP:FOUR ) 01:27, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
My DYK NominationI have now fixed this article for this DYK? nomination of mine -- talk ) 02:18, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
QuestionThe reviewer at Template:Did you know nominations/Sharknado accepted two similarly worded hooks. I'm not sure if that was alright. SL93 (talk) 17:14, 14 July 2013 (UTC) Vegard Lysvoll and reviewing own hooksI disagree with you that you can't review a hook that was your own suggestion, especially when it was just a minor change from the one I suggested. And if you don't want to review your own hook, wouldn't it be better to ping the the original reviewer to come back and say that "Lysvoll scored the 100th goal is in the article and is backed up by a reliable source" and give it a green tick? Alternatively you could review the ALT1 instead, which has only minor changes from the ALT2. The average time for a new reviewer to come is approx 10 days, and I believe the red light with "needs a new reviewer for a hook", which you adds to a lot of nominations do stall the DYK-nominations to much. P.S. I orignally wrote this in talk ) 11:28, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
How did you miss this?I see you were active on the talk page, but you missed WP:FOUR ) 08:13, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
A barnstar for you!
Template:Did you know nominations/Tino di GeraldoHI BlueMoonset - Thanks for letting me know about the nom's issue as I hadn't watchlisted that one. I've added refs. Hopefully, it's ok now but if it needs something else, I'll work on it. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:59, 18 July 2013 (UTC) Hi BlueMoonset, I suggested a new, much shorter hook and an alternative image. Best Voceditenore (talk) 16:15, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
Template:Did you know nominations/Traci Conrad-FischerHi BlueMonnset - I just added the tick. So sorry for not including it earlier! It's gtg. Cheers, -Rosiestep (talk) 02:57, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
ReviewCan you have a look at WP:FOUR ) 05:11, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
Promoter is not responsiblePromoters are not responsible for doing a second review that was done by someone else. For example, I should not have to review articles by Blofeld's group when the reviewer should have done that. SL93 (talk) 12:33, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
I know plenty about Wikipedia having unwritten rules from participating in AfD. The blame can go both ways as you could have said that it was an unwritten rule instead of saying "keep checking" in your edit summary. The only reason that DYK is behind in putting this unwritten rule down is from pointless debates when it is supposed to be a regular rule. SL93 (talk) 04:15, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
So what is in-depth and not in-depthFirst, I was lectured for not following an unwritten rule when promoting. Now, I am being lectured for following the written rule of everything needing to be verified, that has been on the main page for years. Not in-depth gets me Template:Did you know nominations/Information technology in Bangladesh and in-depth gets me Wikipedia talk:Did you know#WP:DYK statement should be removed or changed. Is there some middle ground that I'm missing? I'm asking you because you're the first one who mentioned the unwritten rule. SL93 (talk) 18:11, 22 July 2013 (UTC) Dino eggsCan I fix that article tomorrow? Today's kinda hectic and I could use a few hours to recuperate. Abyssal (talk) 21:48, 22 July 2013 (UTC) George BooleThanks for pointing that out. I'm closing it as Failed. Adam Cuerden (talk) 15:03, 24 July 2013 (UTC) Hey, please take a look at this. -- talk 03:58, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Fatinitza DYKSorry, this is my first DYK candidate in, literally, years, so I was wondering if I've done everything needed for it, or if I should do more to make sure it's promoted? Adam Cuerden (talk) 04:59, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
Prep setsI just realised we're both filling different prep sets at the same time and I've inadvertently added some of the same hooks as you. So I'll leave prep 1 be and let you finish them up (the lead in prep 1 is the same coin as in your prep 4 atm, and I figured you could decide where it was best placed). Miyagawa (talk) 23:42, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
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Did you know ... that since you expressed an opinion on the GA/DYK proposal last year, we invite you to contribute to a formal Request for Comment on the matter? Please see the proposal on its subpage here, or on the main DYK talk page. To add the discussion to your watchlist, click this link. Regards, Gilderien Chat|What I've done23:02, 28 July 2013 (UTC) |
Hi, would you like to elaborate on your !vote? :) --Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 23:09, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
- Any special reason why I should when the Support votes are universally unelaborated? BlueMoonset (talk) 00:43, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- No, and I have asked them as well.--Gilderien Talk to me|List of good deeds 00:45, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- I didn't comment because no one else seemed to be. But I am very interested in your opinion, BlueMoonset. You are, in my mind at least, the closest thing we have at DYK to a coordinator or delegate or whathaveyou, and, as the person who does the most work at DYK, your opinion is very important. My rationale is that it incentivizes improving a much wider range of topics. Currently, only stubs or uncovered topics can make it. The Interior (Talk) 01:48, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- No, and I have asked them as well.--Gilderien Talk to me|List of good deeds 00:45, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
Your comment
I removed your message with the edit summary, "Remove. I didn't notice it and yes, I know what the template is. I have used it myself in articles. So rather than saying that I meant to be impolite or rude, don't." It might not have been best, but I am really tired of what has been going on lately. Apparently, I enjoy being treated like a dog and licking the asses of other DYK contributors to get their approval..but I'm still a good guy. That wasn't paraphrased either. SL93 (talk) 04:02, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
Dino eggs part 2
I've revamped Egg fossil to deal with the plagiarism. It should be good to go now. Abyssal (talk) 18:41, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- dinosaur eggs, which has a close paraphrase template on the article for the same reason that egg fossil did. We can't proceed until both articles are in shape. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:14, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
Hey BlueMoonset. I saw you needed a few things reviewed. I can tick this one off, but the hook needs tweaking, to something like "that "Tuya Soy", one of Ivy Queen's better known songs and frequently included on compilation albums, failed to reach the Billboard charts?" Of course I can't tick off and approve a new hook, and I don't want the most recently proposed hook on the front page, so you'd need yet another reviewer--unless you agree that the change I'm proposing to the hook is purely syntactical, and then we can move right along. Drmies (talk) 00:47, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- And I took care of Template:Did you know nominations/Ted Andrews. Drmies (talk) 00:58, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Drmies, thanks. I've just suggested an ALT7a along the lines of your tweak, but with minor differences. If you're okay with it, then I think you're safe to give the tick. (I think "frequently" might have caused an issue, which is why I used a less definitive term.) Thanks for taking care of Ted, too. I was worried that with the RfC going on, no one was going to take a look at the review list. RfCs always seem to suck out all the oxygen while they're going on. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:42, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Here's another one for you, Template:Did you know nominations/Meka Whaitiri. Consider a slightly tweaked hook, "that Meka Whaitiri, New Zealand's newest Member of Parliament, used to be a member of the national netball team, the Silver Ferns?" I don't expect any kind of titillation along the lines of "oh! what would those Silver Ferns be?", and think it best to specify what this team plays. Drmies (talk) 01:53, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- The comment near the top of the nomination explicitly says that leaving off what Silver Ferns is was deliberate. Whether advisable or not (and I gather you're in the "not" camp), the article clearly needs updating to show (and source) that she was sworn in (and thus is the newest member). So this wouldn't be ready right away anyway. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:24, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Oh, you mean the GA/DYK RfC. Yeah, that's exciting. Drmies (talk) 02:06, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Note my comment on Template:Did you know nominations/Infant clothing. I didn't want to put a "NO" icon on it, but unless something changes it's a NO, as far as I'm concerned. Drmies (talk) 02:21, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- You might want to put a on it, then, to indicate that this is a serious objection, but not one that shuts down the nomination right away. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:43, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Will do. In the meantime, I put a NO on Template:Did you know nominations/Eagle Peak (Wyoming), but I'd like you to have a look there as well. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 03:21, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- And a NO (unequivocally) at Template:Did you know nominations/Persecution of Biharis in Bangladesh. Drmies (talk) 04:04, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
Victor Edelstein
Hello - don't wish to nag, but just wanted to let you know that I dealt with your queries at the Edelstein DYK nomination, and wondered if you had any more comments or concerns to be addressed. Thanks so much. Mabalu (talk) 17:59, 31 July 2013 (UTC)
- Mabalu, thanks, and my apologies for not getting back to it sooner. Unfortunately, as the proposer of ALT3, I can't approve it myself, but I've added my comments and an icon indicating that another reviewer is needed to finish the review. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:16, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
Sorry
Hi there BlueMoonset, I saw you posted on my talk page and I'm here to say sorry. I saw that the edit was removed and I though someone random just removed it and didn't know you did. So I just copied and pasted the 2nd time because I was in a rush. Next time I'll be more careful.Ijoshiexo (talk) 14:05, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks, Ijoshiexo. Before you restore something that's been removed, it's always important to check the edit that did the removing and see what the edit summary has to say. (The View History tab lets you do that.) And now you know that copy-and-paste into Wikipedia is never acceptable. The nice thing about this being an encyclopedia is that there isn't any rush to get material posted. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:13, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- Actually, it isn't where you added them; I had to revert it. That section was talking about recurring characters, people who appear in more than one episode. The two you refer to are not recurring, and I didn't think they were important enough to include: the so-called nerdy girl appears to be a once-only appearance with a single line of dialogue (which likely won't even rate a guest star credit), and the indeterminate school board member seemed borderline for a single episode, given how little other info there was. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:44, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for correcting GA nom
Was in a rush to knock something that had been sitting on my to-do list for awhile. Thank you for dotting the i's on the template for me. —Zujine|talk 15:04, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- You're welcome. It's usually best (and quickest!) to use the GAN template, which creates the GA nominee template with all the fields present and properly filled out so that the bot can parse them; rolling your own template has risks. I end up fixing up to a dozen of these a month. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:36, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
It seems to me that this should be rejected. There are three unreliable sources and a dead link used as references. SL93 (talk) 16:03, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
- You might want to consider giving Faizan the opportunity to fix it, unless the sources cover a significant amount of the material. If you're not inclined to because it took a month to get the article up to proper length, I can't argue with you on it. I agree it's a bad sign when four of eleven sources are problematic. If Faizan does come up with a quick fix to the issue before someone else closes the nomination, then it should be checked. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:32, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
Hey BM, I was away in the last few days, I had made some edits to the article and commented in the nomination page, please take a look if the issues are fixed. Thanks.--Zayeem (talk) 17:41, 4 August 2013 (UTC)
Re: DYK support and promote
Your suggestions noted and appreciated. Thanks. Alex ShihTalk 04:41, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
Reviewing other peoples' articles at DYK
With my most recent one,
- Launchballer, both Melvin Bliss and Synthetic Substitution count: your hook had bold links to them both, so it counts as two articles of the five freebies for QPQ purposes. Jeremy Lee, however, since you didn't get any credit at all for it, does not count. At this point, you have four articles to your credit, so your next nomination is free, as long as it's a single-article hook. If there is more than one bolded article in the hook, you'll have to do a QPQ for any additional ones, and all hooks after that will require QPQ reviews. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:12, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
Request for your advice
BlueMoonset, I'd be grateful if you could provide some advice on the issues that I've raised at [3]. Prioryman (talk) 07:35, 9 August 2013 (UTC)
- It looks like Gatoclass has addressed the issue, and basically said what I might have said. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:24, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
I originally reviewed this and later removed it from the prep area because of my concern with phrasing. Because I originally did approve this, even though I later removed it from the prep area myself, do you think that it would be alright for me to approve the article? My concern with phrasing has been addressed, the hooks are in the article, and this was nominated quite a while ago. SL93 (talk) 20:58, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
- Sure. As long as you're satisfied that the hooks are fine and sourced properly and the article's issues have been fixed, by all means approve the article. You're best placed to know whether the issues that caused you to pull the hook have been fixed. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:21, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
In another DYK matter, would you consider Template:Did you know nominations/A Night in Terror Tower to be eligible for DYK? SL93 (talk) 21:32, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
- I'm pretty sure that since the article has been a redirect since October 2010, nearly three years, that the new article would be thought of as either new or expansion from a redirect (which is effectively new). The only thing that might stop it, if I understand this right, is if material has been reused from the old article, in which case that material would need to be 5x expanded. Aside from that, the eligibility also depends on notability and reliable sourcing, which at quick glance look okay, but the eventual reviewer will be taking a more careful look than I. The old article was just plot and differences, so it's no wonder it was merged into the main Goosebumps article. BTW, is the sorcerer "Morgred" or "Mordred" (as in Arthurian Mordred)? You use both; the old article used the "g" version of the name. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:12, 13 August 2013 (UTC)
Hi, BlueMoonset. Following my return from leave, I have done some more work on the above article, adding new references, shortening and rewording sections, and making corrections. I would be grateful if you could have a further look and let me know any areas that continue to cause you concern. Many thanks. Paul W (talk) 09:32, 19 August 2013 (UTC)