User talk:Chloe.93

Hello, Chloe.93, and

! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:11, 12 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Chloe, just practicing using talk pages. Hope you're having a great day! GinnyMae (talk) 17:56, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work on your article draft. A few things you could improve

• Only the article title should be bolded. You shouldn't bold additional terms, even if they're important.
• You should add links to any terms that the average reader might now be familiar with. That way they can click through and learn more about the topic.
• There shouldn't be spaces between references.
• You should pick the references that are most important - one or two, maybe three in rare cases. If you find yourself using three or four repeatedly, you might want to think about which ones are the most relevant. Long strings of references make the article difficult to read.
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  Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:59, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

	The Original Barnstar
	Constructive and detailed review; nice draft of the article. SCSD639 (talk) 17:22, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]