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Sohn.philip (talk) 19:20, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
Thank you.Daamoy (talk) 20:55, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
Peer-to-Peer Edit
Hey,
Generally, you have a lot of information here and at times it is hard to understand. Maybe work on flowing from one topic to the next instead of listing facts, especially in the intro and structural section. The addition of some transitional phrases to introduce topics will help this a lot as well.
Specifics
- I do not no why you write amino acids like D(aspartic acid) either write aspartic acid (D) and use the abbreviation the rest of the article or just leave it as the name.
- I do not know if makes those bullet points in the structure section is necessary. If you do you them, make them more concise and capitalize the first word.
- Make sure you are consistent with the capitals in your table as well
That's all I have for you! You have a very thorough article just make sure you do not lose novice readers in the details.
Good Luck!