User talk:Tohru Honda13/Archive 2

Signature

Your signature is rather long; it takes up four lines. Signatures aren't exceed 250 characters, which yours does. Don't get me wrong, I think it's nice, but I'd recommend shortening it.--

SUIT 22:12, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply

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Okay, I'll do it right away! Thank you for pointing it out. Hmm.. I thought it was less... (T)•(C) 22:13, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Well, it's a bit shorter... See
SUIT 22:30, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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This better? If not, I'll find a way to make it shorter. Thank you. (Talk) 22:33, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Yeah, that's better, three lines isn't that bad.--
SUIT 22:34, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mr Stabby

Can I ask why you altered my comment in this AfD[1]? Was it a mistake? If so no worries, but if it was intentional I would really like to know your reasoning as editing others comments is not a very nice thing to do. HighInBC ^{(Need help? Ask me)} 22:23, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Note It turns out this was a misunderstanding due to a common bug in the software where edit conflicts are not caught. This user did not change my comments. Sorry for the trouble. HighInBC ^{(Need help? Ask me)} 22:31, 18 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I think its Fine!--Harajuku-Gurl 05:50, 21 November 2006 (UTC)Harajuku-Gurl![reply]

Esperanza Barnstar

Esperanza Barnstar

I, Sasuke-kun27, award you with the Esperanza Barnstar. You demonstrate the qualities of a true Esperanzian: you're kind, funny, you know how to cheer up users when they are feeling down, you are part of the Barnstar Brigade (or were since it was deleted) and you've given out plenty of barnstars to deserving users. What more can I say? You had this one coming (and I wouldn't mind getting one of my own someday). Congradulations! //
27 03:33, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Oh..My...God....
meow! 03:35, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Re:Hola

Thanks, it did kinda of cheer me up, considering I know very little about Wikipedia before August of 2005. And I was thinking of a WikiBreak, chances are I'd be back on Wikipedia in less than 10 hours. But I probaly will slow down my edits a bit. Semi-WikiBreak maybe... oh and thanks for the comment on my user name, it was the first thing that I ever searched on Wikipedia... very lovely user page btw.--
Δdar k s ide 17:26, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Regarding vandal 24.186.198.56

Just to inform you (since you've also reverted some of User_talk:24.186.198.56's pointless vandalism) that 24.186.198.56 has been blocked. By the way, does your username have any relation to Kyo in the anime Fruits Basket? =) –- kungming·2 | ^(Talk·^Contact) 17:48, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I saw the post on his talk page. Thanks a lot for helping to block n=him. And yes, Kyo cat is based on Kyo Sohma! :p Heh heh, see, my userpage is orange! And I loooove Kyo! Originally, I planned to have my username Kyo the cat, but it was too late.....you like Fruits Basket? meow! 17:52, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Yup, I do - I've read the mangas, and watched the anime. I wish there was a second series of the anime, though... It was really good. I'm born in the year of the horse, but I'm not sure whether I like Isuzu or not. =P –- kungming·2 ^(Talk) | Review 00:11, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I was born year of the rooster (Kureno-san!) but I wish I was born year of the cat ;). I have finally completed my manga collection, and am waiting for vol. 15 to come out! Seen the anime, too! That darn Isuzu, why does she have to be with Hatsuharu? Wahh...anyway, good to see that there are other Fruits Basket fans out there. I suggest you see the anime section anime and manga userboxes in my created userboxes; you may be interested! If you have any requests for Fruits Basket userboxes, I will be happy to make them! P.S. It's on my userpage under subpages. meow! 00:17, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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That's great! Of course, I have too many userboxen on my page now (way too many), but I'll be sure to ask for your designing skills in the future! –- kungming·2 ^(Talk) | Review 18:28, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

New User help?

OMG!!! I have only been on wiki....10 mins and im already confused.....hehe my posts arint coming up....lol c u!--Harajuku-Gurl 05:53, 21 November 2006 (UTC)HArAjUkU-gUrL[reply]

Vandalism

I didnt do vandalism on Sasuke Uchiha. Why did you leave me a message saying that I did vandalism? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.237.240.70 (talk • contribs)
Att Anonimous —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.237.240.70 (talk • contribs)

Weird Al userbox

The White & Nerdy userbox is great! I look forward to seeing some more from you. Oh, and thanks for the kind words about my work on the "Weird Al" Yankovic article! ~~ Gromr e aper^(Talk)/_(Cont) 02:09, 22 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

::Um, Gromreaper? Is this image allowed to use in a userbox Here meow! 04:12, 22 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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You know, I have no idea. Maybe just use it until you get a complaint. The box looks great! ~~ Gromr e aper^(Talk)/_(Cont) 05:08, 22 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sasuke Uchiha

Some IP vandal has been removing content, and if you don't mind, could you help me out here? I've already reverted the page about 3 times, and I'd rather not break the 3 revert rule, so could you watch it for a bit? Thanks.--
SUIT 06:34, 22 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Feel free to revert anything you don't like

I'll just tweak some more if you don't mind. The Transhumanist   04:22, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Go right ahead, but please do not modify the background color of the user page. Orange is my favorite color! meow! 04:25, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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okay nevermind, change the colors if you like. meow! 04:30, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Well, how's that? Is it done yet, or is there anything else you would like? I'm in the process of constructing a page on user page design. It's not finished yet (by a long shot), but there are lots of things on there already to choose from, if you want to take a look. It's at: User:The Transhumanist/Userpage design. The Transhumanist   05:15, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, there are a few more things, but I'll notify you when I'm ready to tell you. I'd like to look through your userpage design thingie. While I'm doing that, do me one more favor: add yourself to my Wikipals userbox section! I think there's a link to it on my sub pages, just edit the userbox page by adding a userbox under your name. Thank you so much, it's a beautiful design! Once again I'll notify you when I would like more changes. Should I do that on your talk page or on mine? meow! 05:23, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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On my talk page, that way I'll be notified when the message is posted. The Transhumanist   12:28, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like my page to look a little bit like this. See how the pic of the day is in the center and the forst thing on the page? That's how I'd like it, except I'd like that little Kitten that I have to be in place of that. And if possible, do you think you could change the header of the user page? Just like the one on Firefox's page. But I'd still like you to keep all that you did. Just what I mentioned above is what I'd like. Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. I think I'll go to bed know..... one again, gracias...
meow! 06:23, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I'll look into it. The Transhumanist   12:28, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

P.S. I have a question on the user skin thing on the Userpage design. Is that just for the userpage, or for the entire appearance of wikipedia? meow! 06:23, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Either or both. The Transhumanist   12:28, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Assume good faith.

This revert of yours, [2], is summarized as "rv v". The guy was clearly not vandalising the page. Please
WP:BITE. –Gunslinger47 05:22, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Well, if you saw the invisible notice in the edit page, it says to not change the spelling of the "Bount". He obviously ignored it. If I offended you or the person who edited the Bount word, please excuse me. And by the way, I do assume good faith. I've read those policies, too. About the rv v summary, I dodn't know I used that summary. The drop down thingie came out, and I guess i accidentally chose "rv v". Thank you for notifying me, though. I've realized my mistake. meow! 05:28, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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No problem. Just pointing it out. –Gunslinger47 19:03, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

happy Turkey Day!!!!!

ŋ! --Randfan _{please talk talk to me!}

Happy Turkeyday! Cheers! :) —Rand fan !!

Have a great day! Please respond on my talk page (the red "fan" link in my signature). Cheers! :) —Rand fan !!

Cheers!
subst:smile3
}} to their talk page with a friendly message. Happy editing!

I hope you have (or had) a Happy Turkey Day! Mmmm, that turkey sure was good! I wish we had more....oh well. Hope you have a great rest of the day as well! Sayonara! //
27 22:46, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Hey Kyo, thanks for the turkey :) Though I don't celebrate it, I really hope you and your loved ones have a great day. Also, I'd like to say thank you once again for your kind remarks on the Esperanza talk page. It was incredibly flattering. Oh, and I think the meow is great ;) Thε Halo ^Θ 23:23, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Hey, Kyo! I did like the message and thanks for the turkey! I had a "feast" so now I have to catch up on all of the messages. Cheers! :) —Rand fan !!02:29, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Glad you all liked them! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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WoW

Wow, your userpage is looking very, very nice! I hope you are having a great Thanksgiving. Cheers!__
^♪ 23:30, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Its thanks to
meow! 23:34, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Wow thanks for the fast reply! I love your Thanksgiving greetings and the Turkey I am a vegetarian but its the thought that counts :). I hope life is treating you well!__
^♪ 23:39, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Woops! Vegetarian, eh? Hmm....
meow! 23:41, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Yep thats me all right.__
^♪ 23:44, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Interesting! I will make a different template for you then. I wonder how I'll do it....stay tuned, my good friend! Oh, wait, it said there "whether you eat turkey or not", so that should be okay...anyways, new turkey thingie for you then! hopefully......
meow! 23:47, 23 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Done! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks!

And happy thanksgiving to you, too ^^ —K e akealani 00:06, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

And a Happy Thanksgiving to all your family! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Happy Thanksgiving to you too!

Got your greeting "card". Nice. Cheers. Glad you like your user page too. The Transhumanist   00:53, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Glad ya like it! meow! 01:10, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I most certainly like turkey! Thanks, again! Cheers, mate! :) —Rand fan !!02:49, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Smiley footer

To use a smiley, just type in {{smi|n}} wherever you want it to go. Instead of "n" type in the number of the smiley you want to appear. The footer is programmed to stay at the bottom of the page. In addition to the footer, I've also integrated your page border with the menu in its template. That allows the footer to appear inside the border. Cheers. And have fun. The Transhumanist   01:18, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Oh my gosh, thanks so much! I hate to bother you, but may i request one last thing? I put up some requests a little up there, in the revert whatever you don't like section. If it's possible, could you do it? That's the last time you'll hear from me! Thank you sooooo much! meow! 01:28, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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This is so cool! I am going to put this on my user page and siggy! How do you do this?B e a rly 541 02:20, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

What, the smilies? The instructions on how to use them is up there, and I really don't think you can put smilies in your siggy...--meow! 02:29, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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In the
guideline on signatures it says Images of any kind should not be used in signatures. The Transhumanist   12:35, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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sig

What's the orange colour's number in your signature (I know it's not pure orange because that's the background on my talk page and I can still see it)? I want to change the background to a colour close to it so I can see other oranges. Thanks and happy Turkey Massacre Day! Cheers, mate! :) —Rand fan !!03:26, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

There is a range of oranges Here that you can choose from. Hope they help!¿Qué tal?•meow! 03:39, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you

The Random Acts of Kindness Barnstar

Thank you so much for that sweet reply Kyo cat...That was so kind that you took the time to be so generous and creative! I never knew that Tofurky exists!

Thanks again...I did not find it offensive, instead I was cracking up. Have a great time friend.__
^♪ 03:49, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Aww, shucks! Didn't think I would get a Barnstar for this! Thanks!
¿Qué tal?•meow! 03:53, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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You are quite welcome!!!! You deserved it. Cheers!__
^♪ 13:47, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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League of Copyeditors

I just noticed that you joined the LoC and I'd like to welcome you. What I've already seen of your edits makes me very enthusiastic to have you working with us. I strongly encourage participation in the group, and I suggest you stop by the discussion page and take a look.
Regardless, the to-do list outlines the work that our group needs done and I appreciate any help that you can lend us. If you have any questions at all, you can ask them on the discussion page or ask me personally on my talk page.
I am looking forward to working with you. Trusilver 04:51, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sweet, ditto to that! --¿Qué tal?•meow! 04:55, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I'll look into it when I get the time. Pretty busy! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Smiley Award

Feel free to place this award on your user page, as a token of appreciation for your contributions. If you're willing to help spread the good cheer to others, please see the project page for the Random Smiley Award at:
User:Pedia-I/SmileyAward

User:Pedia-I/SmileyAward1

Wow! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Happy Turkey Massacre Day

I'm really sorry for this late thank you, but nonetheless I hope you have (had, sorry) a good Turkey Massacre Day!--
SUIT 06:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Whether it's 10 years late, I appreciate all Turkey Massacre Days
¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks

Thank you kyo cat for your birthday message. It means a lot and is highly appreciated. Thank you very much and good luck. Culv e rin ? ^Talk

You're welcome! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Arigatō!

Thank you for the turkey, Kyo cat. Happy thanksgiving to you, too. --Kasuga 13:03, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

How cuuuute! Chibi Wikipe-tan! Oh, and you're welcome. ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Happy belated thanksgiving

aka Tortured Turkey Massacre day.. honestly turkey isn't even that good. thank you for your message! and happy shopping on black friday! mirageinred 15:18, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Ooh, i'm gonna have fun shopping today! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Editor Review

Hello Kyo cat...I just wanted to say that I left you a review on your Editor Review, I hope it helps!
^♪ 17:19, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Sorry but I have a tendancy to read every body's userpage that I encounter and I noticed that You play Guitar. I love the Guitar...I want play all the time, mostly electric blues Guitar. Good luck may you enjoy the wonders of the Guitar 4ever.__
^♪ 18:07, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks for the editor review! I laughed at the Here here here parts, that was really funny! I really appreciate it. Oh and about the guitar, I'm taking advanced classes for the acoustic guitar here at middle school. But I've learned a rock song here and there. Thanks again! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:41, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks for the review...seriously take a look at the here, here here parts of your review because that is how I have a high edit count. And thanks for the kind review...Good luck with Guitar!__
^♪ 20:45, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Very good job, good luck
^♪ 21:29, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Great job at the Help desk...You keep beating me to the question! Keep it up...admins like seeing friendly people willing to help out the newcomers. Right now I am about 10 edits away from reaching the 1000 edit mainspace mark. Wish me luck!__
^♪ 04:28, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I'll wish you luck in style....and btw, there was a user who complained about my advice, but I don't blame him, I gave him the wrong advice (accidentally!)....anyways, stay tuned! I'll give you a good luck card on your talk page. Gotta check for an image at the commons....
¿Qué tal?•meow! 04:31, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks apperanly it helped I just finished my 1000sth edit, I would have thanked you earlier but it just wouldn't be the same! Cheers. Also every time I come to your userpage I just love being greeted by that adorable kitten
^♪ 05:23, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Happy belated turkey day

Thanks for leaving a comment for thanksgiving and happy belated Turkey day to you! Gotta love turkeys, yumm. :p Anyways, Yuki will always rock more than Kyo! *runs fast* ~val~ 14:38, 25 November 2006 (UTC)valols[reply]

I'll get you!! ¿Qué tal?•meow! 18:57, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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User_talk:SMcCandlish#Copyedit_portal

Hi
Thanks for your support! I'd appreciate it a lot if you also responded to Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_League_of_Copyeditors#copyedit_emergency_squad, but i've changed my proposal there due to the input from SMcCandlish. --Espoo 20:34, 25 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

All done

Okay, I'm not sure what you were referring to on FireFox's page "header", so I installed all the stuff at the very top of his page onto yours, with some modifications.
The way the status thingy works is you check in and out by changing editing your status page (I blue-linked it to make it easy). Once you've used a couple settings, all you have to do is revert that page whenever you log in or log off.
Have fun,

The Transhumanist   08:44, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Smiles and Giggles

Dear Tohru Honda13: thank you so much for your mucho kind Happy Birthday Wishes left on my birthday. You all make me feel so wanted! Cheers a lot, and see you around.
--Anthony cfc

Friends!

I was reading your userboxes and I noticed I was on your friends list Thanks!!!! Also I added something on my talk page, let me know what you think.__
^♪ 00:02, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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A puppy!!! How cute! Normally, puppies aren't my favorite animals, but that won my heart!!
¿Qué tal?♥meow! 00:08, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Me either I am more of a cat person myself (even though I am seadog!) but I just liked the patrol puppy idea.__
^♪ 00:16, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I'm a friend of yours, too! :) Thank ye! That makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) —
¡Rand fan ! 22:12, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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RfA thanks

Thank you for voting in my RfA, I passed. I appreciate your input. Please keep an eye on me(if you want) to see if a screw up. HighInBC ^{(Need help? Ask me)} 15:54, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Fredil

Did you read what happened to
¡Rand fan ! 21:18, 1 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I'm on my way. You can count on me! Give me some time to think of something. ¿Qué tal?♥meow! 03:03, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Done. See what I put if you like. ¿Qué tal?♥meow! 03:31, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Yay!!!

Aww...Congratulations on reaching the big 1,000! This is always the most fun mark to achieve since it is the first. Do not worry that your mainspace is only 300, it will get there and in my opinion having 300 out of a 1,000 is just supurb. It is close to being a third (but it isn't), just quit worring about your userpage and get out there and have fun building an encyclopedia with your friends! I also wish you a Merry Christmas!___
Seadog^♪ 13:28, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Oh and thanks for respecting
Seadog^♪ 23:32, 3 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Yup.I wasn't the biggest fan of classical music, but I have to say, Beethoven is what what got me into classical music (a little, Heavy Metal and Rock music are way better!). --¿Qué tal?♥meow! 01:37, 4 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Claymore (manga)

Hi. Just a note on copyediting: all contractions should be replaced with the full words—e.g., "can't"→"cannot", "didn't"→"did not." Also, "reverted back" can be replaced with "reverted" without loss of meaning. I am done copyediting Claymore for the day; I have got as far as Noel in the Characters section. I will clear up those problems as I encounter them. Rintrah 05:35, 3 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for the tips. And thanks for helping edit Claymore as well. I'll start again later. --¿Qué tal?♥meow! 17:41, 3 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Your edits are good. If you miss anything, hopefully I will take care of it — or someone after me. Anyway, I have another tip: the first sentence of each character section should contain the name of the character, and not merely "he" or "she". You are right to capitalise "Claymore". "Awoken" should also be capitalised because it is a name.
Some of the grammar also needs correction, but I cannot think of any simple, general advice on it.
I was too tired to do any work on it today.
If you need help on anything, leave a message on my talk page. Rintrah 10:09, 4 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Oh no, it's quite all right. I'm not saying you have to work on it every time you log in. Whenever you can. I'm really glad to be in the League of Copyeditors
¿Qué tal?♥meow! 23:55, 4 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I have quickly scanned through some of the article. I am very, very hungry now and can't do any work, so I will give you advice on how to correct parts of it. Many sentences have some form of "to be" (i.e., is, was, etc.) as the main verb when the action is really implied by another verb or noun. Take this for example, "Noel was in continuous competition with Sofia to decide who is Claymore #3." It is really saying Noel competes with Sofia, but makes the main verb "was".
Some of the sentences are colloquial too, like: "In volume 9, her idea of saying "hi" to Claire after a while involves taking a sword swing at her which didn't sit well with Jean." It needs to be written more formally.
I have seen some sentences which could be changed from Passive to Active voice. Anyway, good luck. Rintrah 03:50, 5 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
You have no idea how happy I am to be receiving such grand tips from you. I'm seeing my mistakes now, and I can see this article will take a long time to finish. I've changed the first names instead of using "he" and "she" like you said. Thanks for the tips!
¿Qué tal?♥meow! 05:02, 5 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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I did another copyedit, so I thought I should advise you on another principle of copyediting. It is best to cut out unnecessary words from a sentence. Extra words sometimes clarify ideas or add elegance, but most often they do not improve sentences. This is an example from the article:

Helen is #22, and at the time of the mission, she is at her first experience with a bulimic.
Her specialty is being able to stretch her arms to extreme lenghths like rubber, even able to bind an opponent. She is on friendly terms with Denev.
In the beginning, Helen mocks Claire ,referring to her as "the weakest and worst out of all of us Claymores" to Raki. Eventually she shows a new form of respect towards Claire on seeing her performance against the bulimic.
Helen is a bit short tempered. In volume 9, her idea of saying "hi" to Claire after a while involves taking a sword swing at her which didn't sit well with Jean. Luckily it was quickly resolved by Denev whom labeled Helen "always the troublemaker".
Helen is also considered to be partially awakened but was able to revert back to her human state.

(I am very tired so my advice might not be as good this time.)
This is what I would do on my first try:
"at the time of her first mission" - does not make sense (there is no context). I would remove it.
"she is at her first experience with a bulimic." - awkward. I would put it: "In her first mission, she encounters a bulimic."
"She is on friendly terms with Denev." - low register. I would say: "She and Denev are friends.", which is more direct.
"In the beginning, Helen mocks Claire ,referring to her as "the weakest and worst out of all of us Claymores" to Raki." - "In the beginning" does not refer clearly enough to what it is really saying, which is really "Early in the story" or "Shortly after becoming a Claymore" (I do not know what the author is really saying; but let us assume the former.) The comma followed by "referring to her as" gets in the way and can be shortened. So I would put it: 'Early in the story Helen mocks Claire to Raki as "the weakest and worst out of all us Claymore".
"Eventually she shows a new form of respect towards Claire on seeing her performance against the bulimic." - "she shows a new form of respect towards Claire" is a roundabout way of saying, "her esteem of Claire grows" or, less formally, "her respect of Claire grows". "on seeing her" should be either "after seeing her" or "because she sees her". I would put it: "Eventually, her esteem of Claire grows after she sees her performance against a Bulimic."
"Helen is a bit short tempered." - too informal for an encyclopedia. "Helen has a short temper." is fine.
"In volume 9, her idea of saying "hi" to Claire after a while involves taking a sword swing at her which didn't sit well with Jean." - far, far too chatty. It should be something like "In volume 9, she swings her sword at Claire and thus displeases Jean."
"Helen is also considered to be partially awakened but was able to revert back to her human state." - there is no reason for "also"; so I would remove it. "considered to be" is a pleonasm; "considered" is better. I would also remove "was" because it is not needed. This is how I would correct it: "Helen is considered partially awakened, but able to revert to her human state."
That is probably what I would do on my first try. I would probably read it again and change anything I saw fit and then press "Save page".

Thank you

Thank you for your support with my RfA. My nomination succeeded. I appreciate your support. Thanks again! =) -- Gogo Dodo 06:50, 3 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome, and congradulations! --¿Qué tal?♥meow! 17:41, 3 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you

Thanks for the lion, he was beautiful in a poetic way :P Also thanks for the support you have given me. It seems that I owe people too much and have no way to repay them. Even so, I want to thank you for your support during this harsh time that I went through. The door of the future beckons... ♥ Fr ed il 01:05, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Don't mentiom it. I love to help people smile in their time of stress. I hope your future holds happiness and joy. And by the way, did you really like the lion and the poem thingie? ¿Qué tal?♥meow! 01:09, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Yes, I did. I love animals (well, not most insects, I'm okay with them but I don't love them) and the lion, to me, was a symbol of purity, a sign of hope. ♥ Fr ed il 01:12, 6 December 2006 (UTC) P.S.: What's with the smilies?[reply]
Igh, I'm afraid of all insects on the face of this earth. The smilies? I think they look cute! ¿Qué tal?♥meow! 01:18, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks!

Thank you for adding your sig to my autograph book Kyo. It's very nice. :-) |
Talk | Sign Here 01:30, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks

For your birthday greeting! Cheers Gizza^Chat ^© 06:26, 6 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!

Thank you Kyo cat for letting me know! I have joined and I shall work to the best of my potential. Cheers and if you need me I am just a "click" away. —
Seadog 00:53, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Oh, thanks so much! Your help is greatly appreciated! Don't worry, you help us on your own time. And if possible, help spread the word! New Members are wanted! And thanks to Randfan as well for joining. --¿Qué tal?♥meow! 00:55, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Cheers for all! —
Seadog 00:57, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Welcome to the Kindness Campaign!

Just my way of saying thanks to newcomers to the Kindness Campaign... a delicious home-baked chocolate chip cookie! Yum. :D ♥ Kylu  (talk • contribs • email • logs • count)

Now I'm hungry, and thanks for the welcome! --¿Qué tal?♥meow! 22:52, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Birthday

Thank you for the birthday wishes; I am currently in school but I hope at least something will happen fun there! Anyway, just wanted to say thanks. Bye! t e h tennis man 13:47, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Glad ya liked the birthday thingie! ¿Qué tal?♥meow! 22:51, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Edit

Hi. I reviewed a few of your edits and noticed something peculiar: You changed "who" to "whom" when "who" was the correct word. "who" is the same case as "I", "he", "she", "whom" is the case of "me", "him", and "her". If the former case is correct, as in "who will eat me?" ("he will eat me"), "who" is the correct word. Likewise for "whom" in the latter case — "whom shall I eat?". Rintrah 14:32, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, crap, sorry about that. I was doing some language arts homework whil I was editing, looking up from time to time to see something to edit. Guess I made a screw up. Sorry 'bout that. Grah....I should pay attention next time.....
¿Qué tal?♥meow! 22:49, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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That's alright. Rintrah 00:34, 8 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Do you have a minute?

Hi kyo cat! I have a question regarding a userpage change for me. I have recently created a new page which can be found
Seadog 22:57, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Wow, that's a really nice userpage. But I did like your old one, too! Hmmm.....Personally, I would say your new one, but I really think that this is up to you. After all, it is your userpage. So, onece again, I personally say your new one. And by the way, thanks for helping us so quickly at The League! Much appreciated! --¿Qué tal?♥meow! 23:04, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Hmm that is what I thought...Hey yeah thanks for letting me join the club : - ) now I have unlimited editing possibilitys. Cheers! —
Seadog 23:08, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Non, non! It was completely your choice to join us. And by the way, whenever you feel like vandalizing, click
¿Qué tal?♥meow! 23:11, 7 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Okay I did...now
Seadog 02:58, 8 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks for vandalizing my box!!! I noticed you forgot to change your status tool as it showed that you were online last night and this morning. If that was true you must be a wikipediaholic. Cheers! —
Seadog 22:52, 8 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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Tch....my brain is totally disfigured.....I even left a notice my user page saying I might forget to switch the status. I wish I could remember....and I went to sleep early last night. This wintery weather makes me real sleepy... I think I might take a nap..... And it was fun vandalizing!
¿Qué tal?♥meow! 23:19, 8 December 2006 (UTC)[reply
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