Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mishk'vei ishah

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and because it was also discussed in great detail in multiple other articles, creating a major
content forking problem, which could only be resolved by putting everything in one place. Newman Luke (talk) 16:48, 20 November 2009 (UTC)[reply
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Tikiwont (talk) 21:20, 22 November 2009 (UTC)[reply
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Newman Luke (talk) 17:51, 22 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
To be more specific -- an inherently POV approach that consists of original research and coatracking on matters that are not encycpoledically established (the real meaning of the old testament et al). This essay fails
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  • Delete and give someone the chance to start it over without the problems. There is the potential for an article here, but this article as it exists is a mess. I rather doubt there is any real chance that it would be improvable, becausse of the questions of sourcing, citations, what needs citations, and all that. On that basis, I tend to think that just erasing the whole mess and starting over with a blank slate. John Carter (talk) 18:23, 22 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Merge into related articles unless completely rewritten. In principle, I don't see a problem with an article on a subject this narrow, but there are serious problems with the article as it stands.
    1. It gives
      undue weight
      to modern academics and not enough weight to religious institutions and traditional views. There are 60 separate references, and only a single-digit number look like they're non-academic secondary sources. While this makes sense for most articles on Wikipedia, an article on a religious topic should primarily discuss the opinions of religious groups, since those will best explain the subject matter as most people actually view it. Currently, you could read the entire article and be unsure how more than one or two religious groups interpret the phrase, which is a major failing for an article on a religious topic.
    2. The article seems to be something like half
      weasel words
      . For instance: "how this should be understood is heavily disputed", "Opinions range from ... to ...", "Some liberal theologians", "Several conservative theologians", "A number of Christian Fundamentalists", "The word ... is a matter of contention", "some therefore see", "It is widely argued". Some specific views are attributed to particular academics, and a couple of traditional Jewish sources, but large chunks of the article have to be either rewritten to explain who says what exactly, or else removed.
    3. The article is structured confusingly. The lead is very vague and doesn't adequately summarize the article. Much of the rest is a laundry list of opposing views, some referenced and some not, interspersed with flurries of citations (a full quarter of which are tagged as requiring clarification). Some views are given more detail than needed, while others (particularly traditional non-academic views) are mentioned only vaguely and in passing.
    4. The article is basically about a grand total of two verses in the Bible, but never actually gives a translation of either, with or without context. This seems like a pretty extraordinary omission: the phrase needs to be put in its Biblical context.
I don't think most of the current content is salvageable. Redirecting the article to
Homosexuality and the Bible or such would make more sense than keeping the article in its current form, but if it's rewritten to address all of those problems then it would be fine to keep it. —Simetrical (talk • contribs) 18:30, 22 November 2009 (UTC)[reply
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