Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Totalitarian architecture (2nd nomination)

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The result was no consensus‎. This does not preclude editorial discretion from being applied to move to draft, or rewrite. Stifle (talk) 10:31, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Totalitarian architecture

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WP:REFBOMB, which did little to prove notability. Given that all the original issues of bad sourcing and synthesis exist, and that attempts in the past two years to prove notability have failed, I'm suggesting a redirect once again. Paragon Deku (talk) 01:58, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply
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As discussed previously, this would just be refbombing. You can find perfectly similar sources on architecture and black Americans, architecture and democracy, architecture and feminism, etc etc etc. None of these would indicate that such things as Black Architecture, Democratic Architecture, or Feminist architecture actually exist as their own independent disciplines. As with any other art form, architecture is often viewed in the context of its creation (or creators), but that doesn’t mean it can be verified as its own discipline. This is always just a synthesis play that ignores the context of sources and ends up making an incomprehensible slurry of unrelated info. Paragon Deku (talk) 07:03, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This is an argument that the title is wrong, not that there is no notable subject here. Of course
move request, not to try to delete the article for failing to have a perfect title. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 00:36, 4 May 2023 (UTC)[reply
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Feminism and modern architecture is the page, for the record. And this isn't simply an issue with the title- the entire article as it exists is arguing that a specific architectural style of totalitarian regimes and therefore a school of architecture is extant. If we were to make a page on architecture and totalitarianism, it would have to be an entirely separate page, because the content of the page as it exists is bunk. Paragon Deku (talk) 02:41, 4 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
However, reference works (listed below) do make use of the term totalitarian architecture. The article as it currently stands does not reflect at all how the term is used in sources. So, in true totalitarian style, I propose we completely bulldoze this article and build a grand article in its place.
I think this is a good point - there's a general feeling in the article that suggests totalitarian regimes build Brutalist architecture - and possibly leaves open the suggestion that Brutalism is an indication of fascism and/or totalitarian thinking.
I'm no historian of buildings, but that seems to me to be far from true. Maybe the concept is just too difficult to write neutrally about (unanswerable questions including what counts as totalitarian, which buildings are examples of that etc). JMWt (talk) 10:04, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No, this article just uses word "brutalist" in one example because one of the sources uses such word, but it does not claim that Brutalist architecture belongs to totalitarian architecture because it does not. I just removed this single word from the page. It did not matter. My very best wishes (talk) 13:37, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It may be true that totalitarian architecture is not a distinct architectural style, but it should not be. We need to have a distinct subject described in multiple RS. A subject could be anything, not necessarily a style. My very best wishes (talk) 13:58, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
WP:TNT argues that if the article's content is useless (including all the versions in history) but the title might be useful, then delete the content to help encourage a new article. There is non-trivial well-referenced useful content in the existing article, so I think that the appeal to TNT as a basis for deleting the whole article entirely is wholly self-defeating. — Red-tailed hawk (nest) 00:40, 4 May 2023 (UTC)[reply
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Yeah I basically don't think there is anything useful to keep (bar a handful of sources) so my logic is fine. As other editors have noted, when you start actually reading the sources (not just the titles) and comparing it to the text they support, it falls apart. Sources are often of dubious reliable (Psychogeography, a paper on Nazi Architecture from a Materials Sci & Eng conference, political org websites), don't properly reflect the text they support and are taken out of context (eg sources about Nazism or Communism & architecture are used to make statements about all "totalitarian architecture"). It will take ages to sort through the current article and likely very little will be retained. Whereas starting afresh will generate an article that reflects reliable sources and is more likely to attract someone like me to work on it.
Seeing the conversations above, I think a move to
Totalitarianism and architecture would be productive and a better reflection of sources. Vladimir.copic (talk) 02:30, 9 May 2023 (UTC)[reply
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*Keep I am 100% sure this was a topic in my high school study books, and those were, all things considered, not exactly the most inclusive of sources. I don't for a moment believe too little has been written about this topic to support an article on it, and a swift google books/scholar search does seem to support that conclusion. --Licks-rocks (talk) 15:16, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I kindly suggest you review the arguments above as to why Google scholar hits of the words “totalitarian” and “architecture” can get hits without actually demonstrably being its own architectural style. Paragon Deku (talk) 17:13, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hmmm, I don't think it needs to be a style to be E, but I agree with you that it's not a style, and the lead part of the article is currently about a style. So there's a bit of an incongruence in my !vote. The body is a discussion of how the sources use it again, in contradiction to the lead, but it does so in a manner that is very much WP:SYNTH.
I concur. TNT it is, per Vladimir.copic. --Licks-rocks (talk) 20:40, 2 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Well, like I said, references #1, 2, 3, 6, 12, 14, 15, 20, 25, 28, 31, 36 and 37 on the page are about the subject of “totalitarian architecture”, not random hits of words “totalitarian” and “architecture” in Google. My very best wishes (talk) 04:12, 3 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Adam - On the whole, the architecture of the Third Reich closely followed... the architecture of the past... by no means exclusive to Germany or to totalitarian systems, it was the official style of many countries
Sablin - If we were not talking about an article, but a concise response to a question (posed during a survey of some specialists or just enthusiasts) that is placed in the title - whether architecture can be totalitarian at all, I would probably limit myself to the statement that there was definitely no specific architecture of totalitarianism and there couldn't have been. (ChatGPT translation).
I removed two instances of apparent original research that weren't supported by the cited sources, but the overall state of the article leaves an impression that it requires a near-complete rewrite. PaulT2022 (talk) 08:43, 7 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Oh no, first source is RS and it says: "In 2017, just before a Polish law came into force banning monuments that “symbolize or propagate” totalitarianism...", hence the connection to the subject of the page is clear. Monuments and memorials are buildings, and they do belong to certain architecture. Sablin [1] criticizes the usage of term "totalitarian architecture", any valid criticism of the term too belongs to the page. My very best wishes (talk) 22:06, 7 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Sablin criticizes the usage of term "totalitarian architecture", but this is not what the text referenced to Sablin that I removed from the article was saying.
Monuments and memorials are buildings, and they do belong to certain architecture. is original research. I couldn't find a single mention of demolished buildings or totalitarian architecture in either of the sources. This argument is exactly the kind of synthesis other editors expressed concerns about: "because there are monuments, and some monuments are memorials, and memorials are buildings, therefore monuments are architecture; monuments build by totalitarian states are therefore totalitarian architecture". PaulT2022 (talk) 22:48, 7 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Oh no, this source [2] provides a number of specific examples. Sablin - agree with removal, but simply because this is strange source with broken link. My very best wishes (talk) 01:14, 8 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Relisted to generate a more thorough discussion and clearer consensus.
Please add new comments below this notice. Thanks, CycloneYoris talk! 00:45, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • Move to draft and rewrite. This feels like a synth-heavy essay that takes myriad mentions of "totalitarian architecture" and retrofits them into an encyclopedic article about a supposedly settled style. That said, it does seem to be a valid topic of discussion (for instance, it does have a coherent entry in Oxford Reference), so I don't think it should be totally bulldozed.--Gen. Quon[Talk] 13:39, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Comment. Making "draft" will be equal to deletion because the creator of this page is no longer active and no one else will be working with the draft. My very best wishes (talk) 15:58, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I would be willing to work on a draft. Paragon Deku (talk) 18:55, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
But it was you who nominated this page for deletion. Does it mean you are changing your opinion to "rewrite"? My very best wishes (talk) 22:14, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No, but if that is the consensus, I would be willing. Paragon Deku (talk) 04:25, 11 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ministry of Foreign Affairs of Russia main building, one of seven enormous Stalinist piles in Moscow
  • Keep, there are more than enough sources, including many of those cited in the article, to demonstrate that this easily-recognisable approach to architecture has long been recognised by architects and historians. Cities such as Moscow are indeed littered with enormous, conspicuous examples, but there are plenty in other countries, recording Fascist as well as Communist aspirations, and widely described as such by reliable sources. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:33, 10 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It would be helpful to provide a source that supports this point of view directly.
In the sources I'm aware of, the Seven Sisters, which are being used as as an example, are inevitably described as being distinct from the "easily-recognisable approach to architecture":

The government decree issued in 1947 to start construction ordered that the buildings look uniquely Russian. So the décor is Russian baroque, even if various American landmarks heavily influenced the architects, including the

Woolworth and Municipal buildings
in Lower Manhattan.

https://www.nytimes.com/2018/12/29/world/europe/russia-stalin-moscow-seven-sisters.html
Is there indeed a source that would argue that this is the same style as, say, Fascist architecture, which Wikipedia currently describes as "Fascist styles often resemble that of ancient Rome, but can extend to modern aesthetics as well. Fascist-era buildings are frequently constructed with particular concern given to symmetry and simplicity"? PaulT2022 (talk) 21:57, 13 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think this is an interesting point. I wonder if it impacts on the viability of this article.
The article as it stands defines totalitarian architecture as being architecture associated with totalitarian regimes.
I'm not sure if this is your point or not, however it appears that the term (or closely associated terms) can refer to something else in general use. Maybe the "totalitarian" part can refer to a particular type of building wherever it is in the world. Or perhaps it can refer to a type of architect mentality as per this article. Other refs which do not seem to fit with the thrust of this article include 1.
I don't know how to parse this. Can one have "totalitarian architecture" in London or Sydney or Columbus, Ohio? If the answer is 'no', what's the difference between this article and Nazi architecture or whatever? JMWt (talk) 10:13, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Precisely. I didn't suggest deleting only because of the Red-tailed Hawk arguments in this discussion: there are sources that indicate that such framing might be notable, and a few non-trivial sources are referenced in this article.
For example, Ward (1970) discusses the purpose of totalitarian architecture and the role of an architect in a totalitarian country. He discusses parallels in how totalitarian architecture seeks to subdue and how totalitarian approaches to architecture are present in democratic societies, which is echoed in the Guardian column you found. There are various discussions of the 'totalitarian' role of the architect, and indeed, Corbusier's ideas. Then, there are sources that discuss the top-down approach of Haussmann's renovation of Paris (although most, I think, stop short of calling it totalitarian), and how these ideas were borrowed by totalitarian urban planning - see Cavalcanti (1992) referenced in the article; also, Urban planning in Nazi Germany.
I think the sources can be used to write a good article discussing the motives and purposes of totalitarian architecture, the role of the architect, approaches to urban planning, and so forth. Unfortunately, none of this is in the article, which mainly advocates for the existence of a supposed "style", a notion not supported or explicitly challenged by the referenced sources. I've proposed draftifying because the current content of the article is primarily synthesis and it requires a near-complete rewrite. PaulT2022 (talk) 15:42, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • According to cited sources and the page, this is a specific type of architecture in totalitarian states. Therefore, no, anything in London or Sydney or Columbus, Ohio would not qualify as such architecture. Accordingly, this page does not mention anything in London, Sydney or Columbus. Le Corbusier is indeed important for this page because of his Moscow projects, i.e. he was one of creators of such architecture. But it does not mean that all architecture by Le Corbusier was totalitarian. My very best wishes (talk) 16:13, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm not arguing with you but I offer the following from the reference I found above
    - “Oslo, Moscow, Berlin, Paris, Algiers, Port Said, Rio or Buenos Aires, the solution is the same,” Le Corbusier maintained, “since it answers the same needs.”
    JMWt (talk) 18:29, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
What "solution" he is talking about? Does he call it "totalitarian architecture"? I am sure he did not mean that. Saying that, we do have page Le Corbusier in the USSR, which does belong here. My very best wishes (talk) 19:23, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
As about the article not giving "the impression... that the concept is contested" - yes, this is true. This is simply because there are few to none RS where the concept was contested. If you can provide such sources, then they need to be included on the page. My very best wishes (talk) 17:21, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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