Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Holby City/archive1

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List of awards and nominations received by Holby City

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Nominator(s): Soaper1234 - talk 15:41, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating List of awards and nominations received by Holby City for featured list because I believe that, after extensive work, it meets the Featured List criteria. In my opinion, the prose is professional and the lead is engaging, with a summary of Holby City and what the article lists. It covers every aspect correctly, is within suitable length and meets requirements of the stand-alone lists. The list is easy to manage and navigate and complies with the MOS. The list is ordered by award and date, with section headings to enhance the reader's ability to navigate. The list features three images, which are all appropriately captioned and checked, and the article is not subject to any sort of edit wars or content disputes. This is my FLC so all comments are appreciated and very helpful! Thank you. Soaper1234 - talk 15:41, 21 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Aoba47

• The following references are dead as shown by this resource here: References 6, 35, and 41.  Done
• Please replace the infobox image with a non-free image. You can choose something related to the television show, as done with the 30 Rockefeller Center used for the 30 Rock list, or images of the one or two of the actors that were nominated repeatedly or received special/notable nominations, as done with the Jessica Lange image in the American Horror Story list. Just wanted to give you two different options. You can use this image here, 1, or move one of the actor’s images up to the infobox. Adjust the caption and ALT text appropriately.  Done
• Numbers greater than should not be spelled out according to Wikipedia’s policy on numbers. For instance, fifty should be represented as numbers (I think this is the only number you missed in the list). - Greater than what?

• Great than 10. Aoba47 (talk) 15:00, 20 July 2017 (UTC)  Done - Soaper1234 - talk 15:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I also agree with The Rambling Man's comments above, and feel that they should be addressed as well.  Done

Wonderful job with this list. I will support this once my comments are addressed. Good luck with this nomination. Aoba47 (talk) 02:01, 2 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I support this as all of my comments have been addressed. I apologize for the extreme delay in my response back to you.Aoba47 (talk) 15:01, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your response Aoba47. I shall work on the number issue shortly. Soaper1234 - talk 15:51, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 16:56, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Response

First of all, thank you The Rambling Man and Aoba47 for taking the time to suggest improvements. Sorry my delayed response; I shall begin work on the article now. Soaper1234 - talk 10:22, 3 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man and Aoba47: I have searched for alternatives to the dead links within the article and cannot find any. Would the best option here to be to remove all deadlinks and the information supported by them? Soaper1234 - talk 10:39, 3 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Well you can't have unsupported claims or dead links for FL I'm afraid, so unless you can find alternative reliable sources then I suppose you either keep these dead links in attempt to get others to find something and withdraw the nomination, or else remove the claims. You could always add those things you're removing to the talk page to see if others can help now or in the future. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:57, 4 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I would personally prefer to do that than withdraw the nomination. I shall move the dead links to the talk page for the future. Soaper1234 - talk 20:01, 4 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have moved all dead links and the information supported by them to the talk page, meaning no dead links feature on the list. Soaper1234 - talk 20:46, 4 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from N Oneemuss

I've never seen this programme, but I do watch Casualty. This list looks good to me, but I do have some comments:

• BBC Elstree Studios in the caption is a disambiguation link.  Done
• The use of "broadcast" in the first sentence seems a bit weird to me; how about "was broadcast"?
  • I don't feel that would make sense as was is past tense, which the serial isn't. Would changing has broadcast to broadcasts make more sense? Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • Sorry, I meant to suggest writing "is broadcast". N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 17:23, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
      • That again wouldn't make sense. To say .... is broadcast on BBC One since [date]... wouldn't make sense? Soaper1234 - talk 18:43, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
        • "has been broadcast" maybe? Your version is OK too though (sorry about the confusion). N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 18:50, 24 July 2017 (UTC)  Done[reply]
• The last sentence of the first paragraph needs to be attributed to Young (there should also be a comma before "while").  Done
• Add the abbreviation BAFTA to both the lead and the body (because it's more widely known than the full name).  Done
• Maybe mention that it has never won any of the National Television Awards (in the lead).  Done - although this may want checking. Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think it should say "it" before "has never won". N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 17:23, 24 July 2017 (UTC)  Done[reply]
• I'm quite unsure about the last sentence of the lead. I see several problems with it: (1) it has probably received more awards that haven't been added/sourced (like the ones with the dead links that you removed – are they counted), so is unlikely to be accurate; (2) it's very difficult to verify (did you count everything in the list?) and could go out of date easily if the list is updated; (3) the inclusion criteria are complicated (and not specified) – do you count "mentions" or "Worst Drama" nominations? I think that even if this is standard for such articles (which it might well be, I don't know), it should be removed.  Done
• Link BBC Online (you can delink it in the references if you link it in the body). -
  • It was already linked in the body. Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• Do the BBC Drama Awards still exist? -
  • They do not so I shall make this clearer in the body? Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • No, I think just writing "were" is fine. N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 17:23, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• I feel like the 2006 link should be added to footnote 6, seeing as all of the other years are there.  Done
• Should "Worst Drama" really be included?  Done
• For the characters that don't have their own articles, I think that
  see
  }} under the subsection headings where it is relevant). I'm unsure of how best to do this though, so if you think it isn't doable then don't worry. -
  • As to avoid
    WP:OVERLINK, I have only linked an actor and their character once in the whole article, so that could be possibly what you have noticed. Let me know if it isn't though. Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply
    ]
    • Yeah, you're right, I can see that now. N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 17:23, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• I'm not sure if the two "mentions" are worth mentioning (pardon the pun).  Done
• With the Inside Soap Awards, I don't think there should be a horizontal line in the second column between the shortlisted and longlisted Best Drama Star nominations (it's inconsistent with other tables).  Done
• Finally, have you thought about running this tool that archives all links? I haven't used it before, but it was mentioned on
  WT:FLC and could be very useful, seeing as there have been issues with dead links in this list. Alternatively (or if it doesn't work) you could archive the links manually, but I appreciate that it would be a lot of work.  Done - I just hope I have done this correctly! Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply
  ]

Once these issues are addressed, I will support this nomination. N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 15:04, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments - I shall response to these in due course. Soaper1234 - talk 15:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@N Oneemuss: I rectified most of your comments and responded to the rest. Thank you again for reviewing this list. Soaper1234 - talk 16:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I just have two comments left, but they're both minor so I support this nomination. N Oneemuss (talk to me · see my edits · email me) 17:23, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@N Oneemuss: I've replied to one of your comments, but thank you for your support. Soaper1234 - talk 18:43, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• All the issues were addressed. Great job on the article. You have my support. Good luck! Mymis (talk) 21:17, 13 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Closing note: This
  WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 23:04, 13 August 2017 (UTC)[reply
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