Wikipedia:Peer review/Cape Feare/archive1
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Cape Feare
Cape Feare
I would like some comments on this episode article. The goal is to turn it into a FA and it is modelled after another FA Pilot (House). --Maitch 20:24, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
- Comment There seems to be a recurring grammatical error throught the article. Gerunds take a possesive subject, not an objective subject. For instance, "...which results in him overreacting to several innocuous situations." should read "...which results in his overreacting to several innocuous situations." Nothing resulted in Bart, something resulted in overreacting which happened to be performed by Bart. Double check for this error. Jay32183 04:56, 25 February 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comment. I did my best, but I am not a very good copyeditor. Both User:CanadianCaesar and User:Scorpion0422 has done some copyediting, so I do hope that it is alright now. --Maitch 23:38, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
- I did some additional copyedit work. Please be sure that the fair use rationales for the images are as specific as possible. It makes it easier for people not familiar with the subject to determine if the images do actually meet the fair use criteria. Jay32183 00:04, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot. --Maitch 00:39, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
- I did some additional copyedit work. Please be sure that the fair use rationales for the images are as specific as possible. It makes it easier for people not familiar with the subject to determine if the images do actually meet the fair use criteria. Jay32183 00:04, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comment. I did my best, but I am not a very good copyeditor. Both User:CanadianCaesar and User:Scorpion0422 has done some copyediting, so I do hope that it is alright now. --Maitch 23:38, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 22:38, 26 February 2007 (UTC)