Wikipedia:Peer review/Hybrid Theory/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because I first saw it as a slump of an article that I felt needed improvement on sight. (This is how it used to look) So I did something in August. However, I felt it wasn't complete. So I spent September looking for lots of sources, including one copy of Rolling Stone from

. Some copy-editing may be needed though, I'm not very good at that. Some improvements may still be needed.

Thanks,

(SUDUSER)₈₅ 14:26, 6 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• A script has been used to generate a semi-
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