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SAT

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History of York City F.C.

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Spiderland

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Pennsylvania Route 73

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Fish

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List of 24 Hours of Le Mans fatal accidents

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 Done — There is only 2 that I could find suitable. Willirennen (talk) 10:47, 23 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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 Done — but 340 MM does not mean 340 millimetre, as it is a car model, abbreviating as Mille Miglia. Willirennen (talk) 10:47, 23 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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The Guardian of Education

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Philippine Idol

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 Done Starczamora (talk) 03:40, 18 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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I ♥ Philippine Idol: Exclusive is a separate program, hence the heading. Starczamora (talk) 03:17, 18 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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 Done Starczamora (talk) 03:40, 18 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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 Done Although the weasel word in question has a citation, it was removed anyway. Starczamora (talk) 03:40, 18 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Harry and the Potters

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List of Alpha Kappa Alpha sisters

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Preity Zinta

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List of Manchester United F.C. managers

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Glock

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Purgatory

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Lord Voldemort

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Romania

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Portland Trail Blazers

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Mysore

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Judge John Deed

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Philip Heselton

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Redlining

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Peru State College

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King of the Ring (1994)

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Wicked (musical)

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Carnivàle

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Shapinsay

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Shapinsay

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Angels & Devils

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Nadia Comăneci

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Persecution of Falun Gong

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World Chess Championship 2006

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University of Southampton

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Edmund Barton

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List of James Bond film locations

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Future of air transport in the United Kingdom

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Cerball mac Dúnlainge

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Baltimore City College

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Battle of Changban

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I think I have done these now. Do you like the changes? --

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I don't wish to undermine the good work of other editors, but I can see major errors of omission in this article, see here. I think it's a long way from being ready as an FA. PR^talk 17:26, 13 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The Blackening

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The Corrs

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King of the Hill (The Simpsons)

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This Little Wiggy

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Lisa the Simpson

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Super Mario Bros.

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List of Bradford City A.F.C. managers

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Joe Nathan

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The Chaser's War on Everything

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Laozi

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Flag of Poland

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