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Maserati MC12

I have completely rewritten this article since I came across at the end of September and it recently became a

Good Article (yesterday but I have been considering nominating it for a peer review for a while). I would like to know what could be done to improve it further. I feel the article is short, but there isn't that much information out there so suggestions for extension of a particular aspect are particularly good. Any criticisms are great as they have improved the article already, see: Talk:Maserati MC12#Factual issues. James086^{Talk | Contribs} 13:27, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply

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My comments:
The specification section is still "listy". Try to rewrite it into textual writings and don't forget supply them with
reliable sources
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I have expanded the specifications into paragraphs and blocks of text, not just lists. James086^{Talk | Contribs} 11:46, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the Ownesr section. It is not notable in terms of the subject and not an encylopaedic in nature.
Consider it done! James086^{Talk | Contribs} 11:46, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sections are still stubby. Expand them or merge smaller subsections.

As always, you can compare with similar FA article. I would suggest to look into Talbot Tagora or Mini.

— Indon (reply) — 13:58, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, thanks for the quick reply! I will try to implement all of those things. However to any reviewers, I will be away for the next 3 days (yeah I chose a bad time to submit a review) so I won't be able to reply to any suggestions. Sorry. I will be back on Saturday and reply to suggestions then. James086^{Talk | Contribs} 14:25, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to see a "development" section for this car, with the existing "Enzo Ferrari" subsection merged into it. The "Owners" sections seems out of place, maybe merge it and the "Top Gear" section into a new section titled "Reception" or something similar, that could be expanded to discuss what various reviews said about the car.
- Tutmosis 17:03, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply
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- I have created "Development" and merged "Enzo Ferrari" into that section. James086^{Talk | Contribs} 11:46, 2 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 22:59, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]