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Mayan languages

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Our Lady of Guadalupe

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• Per
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  , headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
• As per
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• Per
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• There are a few occurrences of
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• As done in
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• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
  User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a. ^[16]

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The Old Town, Aarhus

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Jocelin

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• As per
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• Watch for
  redundancy exercises
  .)
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• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Jang Yeong-sil

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• Per
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• As done in
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• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Ahn Eak-tai

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• Per
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• As per
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  was a great day.
• Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
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• Watch for
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  .)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
• As done in
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  , but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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"She Shoulda Said 'No'!"

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• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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PlayStation 3

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• Per
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• Per
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• As per
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• This article may need to undergo
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• There are a few occurrences of
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• Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: organise (B) (American: organize), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), anymore (A) (British: any more), any more (B) (American: anymore), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
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• Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s.
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Avatar: The Last Airbender

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• Per
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Asian arowana

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• Per
  Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 90 cm, use 90 cm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 90&nbsp;cm.^[8]
• Per
  Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.^[9]
  Specifically, an example is 90 cm .
• Per
  Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.^[5]
• Per
  Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan
  , instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
• Watch for
  redundancy exercises
  .)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
• As done in
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  , but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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MADLAX

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• This article may need to undergo
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• There are a few occurrences of
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  . Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
  • it has been
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
    citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).^[17]
• Watch for
  redundancy exercises
  .)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
• As done in
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  , but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
• Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s.
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Dean Smith

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• Per
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• If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata}} along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
• Per
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• Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
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• Watch for
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  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
• As done in
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• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Harvard Film Archive

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• Per
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• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Tiridates I of Armenia

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Germany

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• Per
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• Per
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• Per
  Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.^[5]
• As per
  Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use ^th; for example, instead of using January 30^th was a great day, use January 30
  was a great day.
• Per
  Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings)
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• Per
  WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.^[15]
• This article may need to undergo
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• There are a few occurrences of
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  . Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
  • it has been
  • allege
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
    citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).^[17]
• Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), metre (B) (American: meter), defence (B) (American: defense), recognise (B) (American: recognize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), aging (A) (British: ageing).
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• Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s.
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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Nine Inch Nails

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• Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
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• Per
  Images should have concise captions.^[14]
• Per
  Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 20inch, use 20 inch, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 20&nbsp;inch.^[8]
• Per
  Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link January 15, 2006.^[5]
• There are a few occurrences of
  WP:AWT
  . Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
  • arguably
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
    citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).^[17]
• Watch for
  redundancy exercises
  .)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
• Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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