User contributions for 98.206.218.218

22 April 2013

• 03:5403:54, 22 April 2013 diff hist +331‎ Talk:Divinity: Original Sin ‎ →‎Should be rewritten so it doesn't sound like a press release: new section
• 03:5203:52, 22 April 2013 diff hist −22‎ Divinity: Original Sin ‎ deleted ad copy verbage

26 February 2013

• 01:3801:38, 26 February 2013 diff hist +902‎ Talk:Puerto Rico (board game) ‎ →‎Controversy

29 November 2012

• 04:3004:30, 29 November 2012 diff hist −1‎ Sperm competition ‎ copy editing for correct comma usage ****
• 02:0102:01, 29 November 2012 diff hist +21‎ Wife ‎ →‎Historical status: Re-worded first sentence to be more consistent with following sentences (f/x "in practice... more by secular laws than religion")

10 November 2012

• 04:2904:29, 10 November 2012 diff hist +371‎ Talk:Dessert ‎ →‎Needs copyediting/rewrite: new section

8 November 2012

• 08:3508:35, 8 November 2012 diff hist +145‎ James Lindgren ‎ added more detail on blogging ~~~~

5 August 2012

• 23:1523:15, 5 August 2012 diff hist +502‎ Talk:Isaac Charles Parker ‎ →‎Parker and the Supreme Court (Justice Harlan): new section
• 23:1223:12, 5 August 2012 diff hist −47‎ Isaac Charles Parker ‎ →‎Later years: Editing to remove nonsense editorial questions. Further factual enhancement doesn't come from in-line questions.

21 June 2012

• 03:0903:09, 21 June 2012 diff hist +257‎ Talk:Nolan Catholic High School ‎ →‎Reads like brochure: new section

18 March 2012

• 18:3818:38, 18 March 2012 diff hist +555‎ Talk:Siege of Baghdad ‎ →‎Article self-contradictary?: new section

8 January 2012

• 17:5117:51, 8 January 2012 diff hist +325‎ Talk:Bundle of rights ‎No edit summary

2 September 2011

• 02:1302:13, 2 September 2011 diff hist +200‎ Talk:Jon Finkel ‎ →‎Dating

11 July 2011

• 21:1321:13, 11 July 2011 diff hist +347‎ Talk:Civilization World ‎ →‎Publisher = Firaxis?: new section

25 February 2011

• 16:1716:17, 25 February 2011 diff hist +74‎ Video game exploit ‎ →‎Response: Re-wrote awkward wording. Someone should reorganize the paragraph though.

19 July 2010

• 01:5401:54, 19 July 2010 diff hist +122‎ User talk:Philcha ‎ →‎4X page re: Civilization and overruling by the senate
• 01:5201:52, 19 July 2010 diff hist +466‎ User talk:Philcha ‎ →‎4X page re: Civilization and overruling by the senate: new section

18 July 2010

• 02:5402:54, 18 July 2010 diff hist −19‎ 4X ‎ →‎Fifth X: eXperience: - the Senate could over-rule the player in the very first Civilization game, not starting in Civilization 2~~~~