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Among Us VR

• ... that a reviewer noted that "claustrophobia closes in when the lights go out" and that "Fear and confusion mix when undertaking the tasks in front of you" when reviewing Among Us VR? Source: [1]
  • Comment: This is my first
    dyk
    .

Moved to mainspace by Ingenuity (talk). Nominated by Pizzaplayer219 (talk) at 15:13, 16 November 2022 (UTC).

• I must have made a mistake because User:Ingenuity moved the draft to mainspace Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 15:31, 16 November 2022 (UTC)

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting: - not really

Overall: @Pizzaplayer219: Good article. However, I feel as if the hook isn't all that interesting. It might be but I feel as if it would be better if you used a different hook. Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:31, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

• Okay I’ll try to think of another one. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 00:16, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that Among Us VR contains new tasks not in the original game such as a Whac-A-Mole Styled task? Source: [2]
  • ALT2: ... that Among Us VR's only map is a sequel to the original game's first map? Source: [3]
• I thought of some more DYK facts. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 00:44, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

• Pinging @Onegreatjoke. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 01:43, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Seems interesting enough, approving. Onegreatjoke (talk) 01:49, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke By the way which one do you think is better? Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 12:41, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke Ping didn’t send so I’m pinging again. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 14:28, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

@Pizzaplayer219: The second hook is the best one if i'm being honest. Onegreatjoke (talk) 14:35, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Okay then we’ll do ALT2 then. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 15:11, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

• @Pizzaplayer219 and Onegreatjoke: I don't see anything in the techradar source that talks about the map. -- RoySmith (talk) 15:13, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

the original game’s map is called “The Skeld” while Among Us VR’s map is called “The Skeld 2”. The name is mentioned in the source. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 15:24, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Forgot to Ping @RoySmith. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 15:28, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

@Pizzaplayer219: could you cite the exact passage in the source that talks about a map. I'm not finding it. -- RoySmith (talk) 15:37, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

“In space, no one can hear you scream, but everyone aboard the Skeld 2 probably can when you’re brutally murdered by an Impostor in Among Us VR.” And “The Skeld 2 is a fairly large and capable craft, but it requires a lot of maintenance to keep it flying.” Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 15:41, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

If the quotes don’t satisfy you then we can simply use ALT1. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 16:24, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Ping didn’t send (again) I’ll just use the different way @RoySmith. Pizzaplayer219^Talk_Contribs 16:42, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Ah, I understand the confusion now. I was looking for the literal word "map", as in map. But you were using it in a video game specific sense, i.e. Level (video games). I'm going to assume gamers would understand this implicitly, so restoring the tick.

@Pizzaplayer219 and RoySmith: I'm not sure how suitable a hook that needs readers to be gamers to understand is; could the hooks be checked again? Kingsif (talk) 04:41, 16 December 2022 (UTC)