Talk:2019–20 Challenge Tour

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	2019–20 Challenge Tour is part of the 2019–20 snooker season series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones Date Process Result September 14, 2021 Good article nominee Listed October 13, 2022 Good topic candidate Promoted
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 17:19, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be popping a look over at this! — GhostRiver 17:19, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Lede

• "earned a two-year card to the World Snooker Tour for the 2020-21 snooker season"
  • Reworded Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:14, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• "Event five" → "event five", as it follows a colon, not a period
  • Sure, but "Event five" was the name of the tournament. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:14, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Suggest changing the target link from COVID-19 pandemic to Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on sports
  • I feel that's a bit
    WP:EASTEREGGy. I know we are all in the midst of this, but you have to think about how this might be read in 20 years time, and the link shows what the pandemic is, rather than an article on how it effected sports. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:14, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• Comma after "Played between August and July"
  • done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:14, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Having finished top of the rankings and won two of the events, mixed tense
  • I've reworded. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:14, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Allan Taylor, who finished seventh in the rankings won the play-off tournament and also gained a place on the World Snooker Tour. Sentence fragment
  • I'm not sure I understand, but I've reworded slightly. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:14, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Format

• "If there are less than 64 entries" → "If there are fewer than 64 entries", as there is a discrete number rather than a vague amount
• "two year tour card" → "two-year tour card" for consistency with rest of article
  • Done both. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:17, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Prize fund

• Good

Participants

• Good

Summary

• Use a script to fix all hyphen/en dash issues
• Comma after "Brown won the sixth tournament"
• "17 year old" → "17-year-old"
• "Hugill who finished the season" → "Hugill, who finished the season"
• First sentence of the second paragraph is technically a fragment, as there is no active verbs ("won" is part of the modifying clause)
  • Done all Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:19, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Results

• Good

Rankings

• Good

References

• Alternation between using www.worldsnooker.com, wst.tv, and World Snooker as the work parameters for the same website; suggest using the latter, if for purely aesthetic reasons
  • Changed all to |work=World Snooker Tour, as that's what they are now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:26, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

• One photo used, relevant and properly licensed
• The caption should have a period at the end, as it is a full sentence, per
  MOS:CAPTION
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:22, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• [7] Earwig score looks generally good at 13.0%
• Some close paraphrasing in note [a]; suggest rewording to "Postponed due to inclement weather causing health and safety concerns at the venue"
  • I've gone ahead and just reworded it to be really simple. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:22, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• No stability concerns within the revision history

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 17:27, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• I've covered all of the above, GhostRiver. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:27, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]