Talk:Adventure Time season 3
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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 17:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
- Hi, I'll review this one. FunkMonk (talk) 17:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
- "an implied past relationship between Marceline and Princess Bubblegum." It needs to be specified the relationship is lesbian in the intro. Relationship alone is ambiguous.
- "a dog with magical powers to change shape and grow and shrink at will" I see this formulation has been accepted in former reviews, but I think it sounds odd. It seems "the" should e added before "magical powers", or be followed by "that enable him to".
- I see it has also been previously accepted, but why does the whole cast of writers have to be mentioned in the intro?
- As an animator myself, and because this is after all an animated show, I find it puzzling that the production section hardly even touches on this aspect. But I guess it is animated in Korea or some such?
- I'll add a little blurb. It's mostly explained in the parent article, though.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:54, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
- Apart from these issues, which aren't exactly grave, looks good. FunkMonk (talk) 18:33, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
- I think it all looks good now, so I'll pass. The only minor quibble left is that a footnote says Finn is 13, because he became so in a previous episode. That has no source, and though it might seem obvious, it should have one. FunkMonk (talk) 23:43, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
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