Talk:Bestia Salvaje

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (

   lists

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2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

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   reliable sources): c (OR

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3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (

   focused

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4. It follows the
   neutral point of view
   policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have

   suitable captions

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7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Delink Mexico per
  MOS:OVERLINK
• "A second-generation wrestler, he was the son of Espectro II and the brother of Corazón Salvaje as well as the brother-in-law of Charrito de Oro." - he was the son of Espectro II, the brother of Corazón Salvaje and the brother-in-law of Charrito de Oro
• Try not to put citations in the lead per
  MOS:CITELEAD
  and put it in the body of the article at the appropriate place

Personal life

• "He is the son of Espectro II" - needs a period to end this sentence

Consejco Mundial de Lucha Libre (1987–2004)

• "Bestia Salvaje defeated Águila Solitaria to win the Mexican National Welterweight Championship, the first championship of his career." - title
• "("bet match" hair vs. hair match," - the second parentheses is needed here
• "After the team broke up," - disbanded is more formal

Los Chacales (1995–1996)

• "becoming the sixth overall championship team." - winning
• "Los Chacales' reign as CMLL World Trios Champions lasted almost a year, 357 days," - lasted 357 days,
• "Bestia Salvaje teamed up with Chicago Express defeating Dos Caras and Bronco, El Hijo del Santo and Olímpico, and Atlantis and Atlantico in the tournament finals to win the tournament." - repetition of the word "tournament"
• "before being eliminated by the Great Sasuke in the semi-finals." - The Great Sasuke

Bestia and Scorpio Jr. (1996–1999)

• "During the match it looked like El Felino turned on his brother," - appeared that
• "allowing Bestia Salvaje and Scorpio Jr. to beat up Negro Casas." - defeat
• "El Felino pulled his mask off," - removed his mask,
• "on November 13, 1998." - the period is not needed here
• "in a tournament." - which tournament?
• "which lead to a match on February 5, 1999" - led
• "Casas and Hijo del Santo won the match by disqualification and thus the championship as well, but refused to accept the belts due to how the match ended." - repetition of the word "match"

Los Guapos (1999–2002)

• "In the following months," - please state if possible how many months exactly
• "and looked down on anyone who was not as handsome as he was." - despite those who were less handsome than him.
• "2000 Shocker was invited to work" - In 2000, Shocker
• "Over the following months," - how many months preciesly?
• "without a partner for Trios matches, their solution was to bring in another veteran Emilio Charles Jr. to become the fourth Guapo team member," - the two commas should be replaced by separate period and the word "their" begin with a capital letter
• "forcing Charles to have all his hair shaved off as a result of his loss." - because he lost. for variety

Los Talibanes (2002–2004)

• Delink terrorist per
  MOS:OVERLINK
• "over the following years," - how many years exactly?

International Wrestling Revolution Group (2000–2007)

• "A month later he defeated Cyborg in a Lucha de Apuestas match, leaving Cyborg bald as a result." - repetition of "Cyborg"

References

• Reference 2 needs to be archived or replaced
• The publisher of reference 17 should be changed from Super Luchas Magazine to Súper Luchas and made the work and not the publisher
• Reference 34 is missing the author

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:57, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• MWright96 I believe I have addressed all issues, incuding trying to be as specific as I can whenever I knew the exact time. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:21, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. I have made a minor change to the prose. MWright96 (talk) 08:04, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]