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Apply lede changes to similar pages?
I've made a series of simplification and style suggestions for this page's lede which, IMHO, could be similarly applied to the series's other episode pages. – AndyFielding (talk) 07:54, 14 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
diff showing an example of the changes AndyFielding was referring to.
I'm fairly sure I've seen you make similar changes to other articles and I think you've probably figured out by now -- as I gradually did -- that there aren't that many people actively editing these articles, and that if you want it to make it happen you'll need to
MOS:NUMERAL, but I don't feel strongly about it.) I'm not sure about writing "In the episode", feels a little redundant a more than a little obvious (it also seems strangely in contradiction to AndyFielding's strong preference for using pronouns elsewhere), but that's only a minor nitpick and I only mention in case you plan to repeat it in many other articles. -- 109.78.207.72 (talk) 03:18, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply
