Talk:Far West (Taixi)

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talk · contribs) 00:01, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply
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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (
    lists
    )
    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (
    reliable sources): c (OR
    ):
    Possibly for a couple of parts--see below.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    In research, you could probably find more appropriate images. The satellite image of Europe is not helpful at all.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

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talk to me!see my work 00:01, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply
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  • I mean by using both the English name and the Chinese name. Other Chinese exonyms do not have such a thing. Johanna (formerly
    talk to me!see my work 15:58, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply
    ]
  • The article's lead does not summarize key aspects of its contents.
  • Fixed.
  • There's a lot of scope problems here--while the Far East article is far from perfect, its scope is a lot better than this. What was its impact? What was its cultural meaning? Did any other countries use it? Did it last into modern times?
  • The first two sentences of the China part could be expanded vastly. That's a lot of etymological change that you put without explaining much.
  • That's all that is written in the source: It is worth noting that, from the earlier printed texts, Ricci seems to have invented the term taixi (Far West) as a back-formation from the Eurocentric notion of the Far East, not knowing that the term was already in use for an area in the south of Inner Mongolia and occasionally also for parts of India.
  • Okay, but I'm sure there's more in other sources you could find… Johanna (formerly
    talk to me!see my work 15:58, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply
    ]
  • The source is Tsai. Tsai uses Aizawa Seishisai as an example of a Japanese intellectual who opposed the Western idea of Asia and advocated using tradition East Asian geographical terminology, i.e. dividing the outside world into Western Barbarians, Northern Barbarians, Southern Barbarians, the Far West, and the Wild West.
  • Thank you for the review.--Khanate General talk project mongol conquests 03:33, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]