Talk:Greef Karga

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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on February 9, 2020.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that actor Carl Weathers agreed to play Greef Karga on the Star Wars television series The Mandalorian
on the condition that he direct future episodes of the show?
Current status: Good article

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:51, 8 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Moved to mainspace by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self-nominated at 23:09, 24 January 2020 (UTC).[reply]

  • This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline and either hook could be used, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:27, 28 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • QPQ done, thanks. Restoring tick. Yoninah (talk) 22:17, 4 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:06, 23 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "the Bounty Hunters' Guild," always a bit odd to "part link" a "formal title". I would unlink and go for linking bounty hunter at the next chance.
    • Yeah, I think you're right. Changed. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " in a handful of episodes" curious about this as there's only been a handful of episodes of the whole show! Four episodes really is still a handful!
    • lol Changed this to say he was originally only supposed to make a brief apperance. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "ensures everyone follows" not everyone, just bounty hunters. Presumably "ensures its members follow"?
  • "so far" is a little like
    WP:CURRENTLY
    . Maybe "as of the end of the first season"?
  • What's a cantina?
  • "a big job" seems a little informal...
    • Changed to "a lucrative job". — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "who insists of meeting " ENGVAR? insists on meeting?
    • Yup, should've been "on". Fixed that. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the Force " the should be inside the pipe.
  • Fixed. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Lots of triple-referencing going on, per
    WP:CITEKILL
    any chance of reducing it a little?
    • I can certainly do this; will get on it tomorrow, as it's getting a bit late for me now. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "him.[20][17][21] " ref order.
  • I think you've linked "stormtroopers" in other similar articles.
    • Oops, right you are. Fixed. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • ""Chapter 8: Redemption"" you've already linked this as the season's "finale".
  • "The character is slated to return..." well Weathers has said he's definitely in it so isn't it stronger than slated?
    • Changed to "will return". — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Actor Carl Weathers said..." no need to reintroduce Weathers here.
  • Particularly as you have "Weathers has described his " in the previous sentence.
    • Oops, yeah, lol.
  • "and Carl Weathers has" no need for Carl here.
  • "2019,[45][46] According" should be a period.
  • "showrunner Jon Favreau " both overlinked. And both overlinked in the caption too.
    • Removed the wikilinks from the photo caption and the Portrayal section. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "enjoys" tense?
  • " series, and in " one too many run-ons. Split here.
  • "Weathers said ... Weathers performed... Weathers said " repetitive.
    • It's Weathers' world, my friend; we're just living in it! Lol I changed a few "Weathers" to other words to reduce the repetition. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "study the different energies the director and actors brought" feels whimsical, can this be "quoted" rather than written in Wikipedia voice?
    • I just reworded it a bit. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "particular enjoyed" +ly
  • " with "The Client", " -> "with the Client"
  • "Screen Rant ranked" overlinked.
    • Removed the link in Critical Reception. — Hunter Kahn 05:27, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "performance of Carl Weathers, " no need for Carl.

That's all I have so I'll put it on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:45, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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