Talk:Just Got Paid (Sigala song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 19:04, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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So we meet again, will take this one on... --Kyle Peake (talk) 19:04, 22 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

  • WP:OVERLINK
    of Sigala in the infobox
  • "singer Ella Eyre and" → "singer Ella Eyre, and"
  • "Meghan Trainor, featuring rapper French Montana." → "Meghan Trainor from the former of the three's debut studio album, Brighter Days (2018). The song features a guest appearance by rapper French Montana." with the appropriate wikilink
  • "Sigala, Eyre, Trainor and Montana co-wrote "Just Got Paid" with" → "The performers co-wrote it with"
  • "Nile Rodgers and Jason Pebworth," → "Nile Rodgers, and Jason Pebworth"
  • "as the tenth and final single from Sigala's debut studio album, Brighter Days (2018)." → "as the tenth and final single from the album." with the appropriate target
  • "and lyrics about living a luxurious lifestyle in spite of" → "and its lyrics deal with living a luxurious lifestyle despite" for avoiding repetitive wording
  • "reviews from critics" → "reviews from music critics" with the target
  • Add what was praised specifically in the above sentence
  • Looking at the section, every critic praised something different. The only common thread between all the reviews is being positive.
  • "was commercially successful in the United Kingdom, and reached number 11 on" → "reached number 11 on"
  • "number 7 in Scotland and number 12 in Ireland" → "number 7 on the Scottish Singles Chart and number 12 on the Irish Singles Chart" with the target and wikilink
  • "The music video for it was released" → "An accompanying music video was released"
  • Add some info about the synopsis of the video
  • "and Eyre performed "Just Got Paid" several times" → "and Ella Eyre performed the song several times"
  • Any particular reason Eyre's full name should be stated a second time?

Background and release

  • Retitle to Background and composition; I will provide further instructions
  • Remove wikilinks on the lead artists
  • "studio album, Treat Myself (2020), had" → "studio album Treat Myself (2020) had"
  • "more collaborations as she had" → "more collaborations, as she had"
  • "Sigala, Eyre and" → "Sigala, Ella Eyre and"
  • Again, I'm sure just "Eyre" will get the point across to readers.
  • "Karim Kharbouch, George Astasio, Jon Shave, Nile Rodgers" → "French Montana, George Astasio, Jon Shave, Nile Rodgers,"
  • "with production from" → "with production being solely handled by"
  • "and she hired Sigala" → "with her hiring Sigala"
  • Second para will be moved to another section, as I will instruct
  • "between the trio with a featured verse from French Montana on" → "between the trio, with a feature from French Montana, on"
  • "as the 10th single" → "as the tenth single"
  • "debut studio album Brighter Days (2018)." → "debut studio album Brighter Days."
  • "They serviced the song" → "The record labels serviced the song"
  • "the format in Italy on 14 September." → "the radio format in Italy on 14 September 2018."
  • "A Remix EP to promote it" → "A Remix EP to promote the song"
  • "remixes of the song by
    MOS:THEMUSIC

Composition

  • Move this to being the second para of the above section instead
  • Target poppy to Pop music on the audio sample main text
  • Add the appropriate ref(s) to back up the sample's info
  • "several genres of music," → "several music genres,"
  • "has a composition of horns and riffs," → "is composed of horns and riffs,"
  • "Trainor and Eyre deliver" → "Trainor and Ella Eyre deliver"
  • Not yet done per above.
  • "in which Eyre's verse sees her attempt to save money but then give in and spend it" → "with Ella Eyre's verse seeing her attempting to save money but then giving it and spending it"

Reception

  • Swap this with the section it currently preceeds
  • "received generally positive reviews from critics." → "was met with generally positive reviews from music critics." with the target
  • "take" and added that Montana" → "take", and added that French Montana"
  • "It was listed among its release week's top 5 songs to listen" → "The track was listed among its release week's top five songs to listen to"
  • "...you put at the top your going-out-after-payday..." quote has grammar issues, it should be something like "you put at the top [of] your going-out-after-payday"
  • "over its production." → "over the production."
  • "wrote that Trainor and Eyre" → "wrote that Trainor and Ella Eyre"
  • Per above.
  • "and carefree" and a" → "and carefree" as well as a"
  • "called it a" → "labeled the song a"
  • ""Just Got Paid" was commercially successful..." remove this since Ireland is not a part of the UK
  • "and attained a Platinum certification in the country," → "and was certified platinum by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) in the country,"
  • [16] should solely be at the end of the sentence behind the other refs
  • "It went number one" → "It peaked at number one"
  • "Other peaks for" → "Other top 100 peak positions for"
  • "certified Gold in Australia and Poland." → "certified gold in Australia and Poland by the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA) and the Polish Society of the Phonographic Industry (ZPAV), respectively."

Promotion

  • Retitle to Release and promotion
  • Move the release para of the first section to this one instead as the opening para
  • "It commences with Eyre" → "It commences with Ella Eyre"
  • "which she departs as soon as she receives her" → "from which she departs as soon as receiving her"
  • "The two unite at a" → "The two of them unite at a"
  • "perform a dance routine as" → "perform a dance routine, while"
  • "Montana does not" → "However, French Montana does not"
  • [15][13] should be in numerical order
  • Merge the one line para with the above one
  • "Eyre performed "Just Got Paid" several times for Capital FM," → "Ella Eyre performed "Just Got Paid" for Capital FM numerous times,"
  • "Jingle Bell Ball as well as the 2019 Summertime Ball and Jingle Bell Ball." → "Jingle Bell Ball, and in 2019 at the Summertime Ball and Jingle Bell Ball, respectively."

Track listing

  • Retitle to Track listings
  • Digital download → Digital download / streaming

Credits and personnel

  • Are you sure Ella Eyre shouldn't be cited under her stage name here instead?

Charts

Weekly charts

Year-end charts

Year-end chart position for "Just Got Paid" → 2019 year-end chart position for "Just Got Paid"

Certifications

  • Format to remove the ^ shipments part of the certtable since that is not invoked anywhere in the actual certifications

Release history

  • Label → Label(s)
  • Are you sure the Italian release was contemporary hit radio?
  • Yup

References

  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Copyvio score looks great at 12.3%!
  • Remove Google Play from the title of ref 5
  • Cite BBC as the publisher of ref 7 instead
  • Ref 9 should cite multiple countries to verify the release was various and put the retailers in brackets; (US), for example
  • Ref 19 cites an incorrect archive
  • It's the best that's available, I added a postscript that will help.
  • Charts around the world → Charts Around The World on ref 20 and fix the accessdate to maintain consistency
  • Target HRT to
    MOS:CAPS
    issues
  • Cite MAHASZ instead for ref 39 and target to Association of Hungarian Record Companies

External links

  • Good

Final comments and verdict

  • Finished this article's review in under a day, putting it  On hold until the issues are fixed and don't feel afraid to ask me if you have any queries! --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:11, 23 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks a lot, your speed is indeed very impressive! I've done everything and left some comments, the main one being, why do we need to spell out Eyre and French Montana's full names several times.--NØ 10:31, 23 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • MaranoFan Because those are not the performers' real full names, also could you maybe add more reviews to try and reach a basis of what was praised since it can't be done currently? --Kyle Peake (talk) 12:17, 23 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • MOS:MR states: "People who are best known by a pseudonym should be subsequently referred to by their pseudonymous surnames, unless they do not include a recognizable surname in the pseudonym". In this particular situation, "Eyre" and "Montana" are both clearly distinguishable surnames. As for the reception, Radio.com praised Montana's verse, Time praised the production, Idolator praised Trainor and Eyre's vocal performance, and Capital FM praised Sigala and Eyre's pairing. Thus it is virtually impossible to condense this into one statement other than stating they're all positive reviews. A Google search doesn't turn up any more reviews.--NØ 12:27, 23 July 2020 (UTC)[reply
    ]
  • MaranoFan Are you sure they are classified as recognisable though or does that context apply when the surnames are real but forenames are fictional? --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:38, 23 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Considering there are no other people or songwriters with the same last name involved, I do see the repetition of last names as unnecessary. Once readers see Ella Eyre (with the wikilink) there’s no reason or possibility for them to then assume "Eyre" is referring to someone else.—NØ 18:48, 23 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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