Talk:Liksom en Herdinna, högtids klädd

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Haven't done one of your articles for a good amount of time, here comes a review! --K. Peake 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on, good to hear from you again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:23, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
  • Thanks!
• Keep the composition being No. 80 here but write out and source in the body, as refs are discouraged in the lead
  • Done.
• "The Epistle is a" → "It is a" and merge this with the above para because you don't have enough content for two
  • Done.
• Add a sentence about the composition's reception to the lead
  • Added.
• Remove [2] from the lead because there is no direct quote here
  • Done.

Context

• First para looks good!
  • Thanks.
• "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per
  MOS:NUM
  • Done.

Song

Music and verse form

• Audio sample looks good!
  • Noted.
• Merge the first para with the second per the short length
  • Done.
• Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
  • Done.
• Pipe ⁶
  ₈ time to Time signature
  • Done.

Lyrics

• Nicolas Boileau → Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux
  on the img text
  • Done.
• Introduce who Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux is in prose
  • Done.
• "Further, a horse" → "Furthermore, a horse"
  • Done.
• "a mention of Ulla." → "a mention of Ulla Winblad." per Wiki policy on names
  • Done.
• "But Bellman displays a" → "However, Bellman displays a"
• Done.

• Img looks good!
  • Thanks.
• "Bellman's biographer, Paul Britten Austin, describes" → "Bellman's biographer Paul Britten Austin describes"
  • Done; both are correct.
• "like a Constable painting," → "like a John Constable painting,"
  • Done.
• "However he finds" → "However, he finds"
  • Done.
• "crowing outside, and the bell" is the form of English used really the correct one to have a comma before and?
  • Yes.
• "with Epistles 71, "
  Ulla! min Ulla!
  ", and" → "with Epistles 71 and" because 71 has already been introduced
  • Done.
• "and Ulla's way of" → "and Ulla Winblad's way of"
  • Done.
• Pipe classical to Classical music
  • Done.

References

• Copyvio score looks superb at 10.7%!!!
  • Noted.
• Add the language parameter to ref 1
  • Done.
• Pipe The Bellman Society to
  MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Done.
• Should Eva Toller really be listed as an author for ref 23 when that is on her website?
  • Yes, she could be hosting guest authors there too.

Sources

• Pipe Simon and Schuster to Simon & Schuster
  • Done.

External links

• Good
  • Noted.

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until everything is fixed; coincidentally, you expressed gratitude around the same time I started actually reviewing! --K. Peake 09:20, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Many thanks. I think I've fixed everything to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Chiswick Chap All good, apart from where you forgot to change the pipes for rhyming pattern and ⁶
  ₈. --K. Peake 09:46, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• I've done those for you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:48, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• ✓ Pass now; I am very pleased with such a quick response! --K. Peake 09:55, 20 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]