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Standard disclaimer that you would need newspaper or other sources to take this to ACR/FAC.
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Passing through commercial properties? Could be clarified.
And the phrase is used twice in two consecutive sentences.
Try varying how you start sentences - I generally never start two sentences in the same paragraph with the same word(s).
Need comma after "After leaving the state forest nursery".
No issues otherwise. --Rschen7754 22:12, 5 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I think I have fixed the problems, I varied the sentences by changing most of them and moving any remaining ones that start with the same group of words far apart, one group is at the beginning and the other is towards the end. Detcin (talk) 15:50, 6 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]