Talk:One by One (Cher song)

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:31, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]


I will get on with this right away today! --K. Peake 07:31, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (
    lists
    )    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to
    reliable sources
    )    :
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

  • adult contemporary should not be capitalised in the infobox
  • Pipe R&B to Contemporary R&B in above
  • Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
  • Add the co-written part to the second sentence with the two versions recorded part since they wrote both of them too
  • rock and adult contemporary needn't be capitalised
  • Pipe DJ to Disc jockey
  • "released "One by One" as" → "released the song as"
  • Remove the after part since that is not notable for lead
  • "as It's a Man's World's lead single" → "as the lead single"
  • "the single was met with positive reviews" → "the song received positive reviews"
  • "In the United Kingdom, it reached" → "In the UK, the song reached"
  • "top ten." → "top 10." per
    MOS:NUM
    and mention the name of the chart
  • "where it barely cracked the" → "barely cracking the"
  • "singing the track from" → "singing the song from"

 Done

Background

  • "She starred in" → "she starred in" per this being part of the same sentence
  • "Having turned down films" → "having turned down films" though the quote says infomercial diva instead and the other two parts are not sourced
Source 1 (NYT, Queen of the comebacks) - "...an embarrassing interlude as an infomercial queen" Source 3 EW - "...just devastating to my career"
  • Why is there [] for the infomercials when that is part of the original quote?
  • "career", she recalled." → "career", Cher recalled."
  • Where is the commercial failure sourced?
Source 1 (NYT, Queen of the comebacks)- "...died at the box office two weeks after it opened last April"
  • "She came to" → "Cher came to" and add the year for If These Walls Could Talk
  • "Her first studio album since 1991's Love Hurts, Cher saw" → "The record was Cher's first studio album since 1991's Love Hurts; she saw"
  • "of challenging herself;" → "of challenging herself,"
  • "of bored with it"." → "of bored with it.""
  • Pipe covers to Cover version
  • "and
    MOS:THEMUSIC

 Done

Composition and remix

  • rock and adult contemporary should not be capitalised on the audio sample text
  • Pipe R&B to Contemporary R&B on the sample text
  • ""One by One" has been described" → "Musically, "One by One" has been described"
  • rock and adult contemporary should not be capitalised
  • "It begins with" → "The song begins with"
  • Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitars
  • "In the refrain she sings" → "In the refrain, she sings"
  • [8][6] should be in numerical order
  • Pipe R&B to Contemporary R&B
  • "as they felt it would" → "as they felt the version would"
  • Pipe DJ to Disc jockey

 Done

Release and promotion

  • Wikilink music video on the img text
  • "as well as her own" → "and her own"
  • "In the United States, it was released on May 21 as" → "In the US, it was released on May 21, 1996, as" per
    MOS:US
  • Wikilink lead single
  • Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
  • "In the United States," → "In the US,"
  • [6][11] should only be at the end of the sentence and in numerical order
  • Remove overly obvious wikilink on Los Angeles

 Done

Reception

Critical

  • "that the original version was" → "that the original version is"
  • Remove pipe on Billboard
  • "opined it was a" → "opined the song is a"
  • "sweet as can be"." → "sweet as can be."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
  • "said it was one of" → "said the song is one of"
  • "PopMatters Peter Piatkowski highlighted its" → "PopMatters' Peter Piatkowski highlighted the"

Commercial

  • [26] should be invoked after June 15, 1996 instead
  • "for fourteen weeks in total." → "for 14 weeks in total." per MOS:NUM
  • "It found more success on the" → "It found more success on the US"
  • "at number 6 and 7," → "at numbers six and seven,"
  • "came in at number 9." → "came in at number nine."
  • "where it reached" → "where the song reached"
  • "In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
  • "her first top ten hit" → "her first top 10 hit"
  • "chart it came in" → "chart, it came in"

 Done

Track listings and formats

  • Good

Credits and personnel

  • Good

Charts

Weekly charts

  • See
    MOS:TABLECAPTION
  • Add Cash Box in brackets instead –  Done by Vaughan J.

Year-end charts

  • See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Notes

  • Good

References

  • Copyvio score looks fabulous at 13%!!!!
  • Link for WEA should only be on ref 5
  • Fix
    MOS:QWQ
    issues on ref 20
  • WP:OVERLINK
    of Music Week on ref 36

Bibliography

 Done

External links

  • Good

Final comments and verdict

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; quite a smooth article and ensuing review! --K. Peake 11:30, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for yet another great review @Kyle Peake:! I believe I have fixed everything you've pointed out; let me know if i've missed anything --Christian (talk) 21:40, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • ✓ Pass now, I did some copy editing but this looks great! --K. Peake 16:41, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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