Talk:Robin Lehner

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Correct me if I'm wrong but did Lehner not play in the

He did not. —Krm500 ^{(Communicate!)} 01:00, 24 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

(In response to Tomas e's comment) I'm not sure if his contract alone is enough ensure that the article is currently valid (I want it to be), but i believe that as soon as he plays one NHL regular season game, then it should be fine. I was going to wait until that happened (hopefully soon), but I saw someone else threw up an article and I figured I might as well put up the one I had written beforehand with his previous stats. If it gets deleted now, then I will just keep it and resubmit when Lehner gets his first start. :) Cheers! Ibanez Guy (talk) 17:50, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Or you could ask an admin to restore the latest revision before it was deleted. —KRM ^{(Communicate!)} 23:31, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Why was Robin Lehner said to have mental health issues for not participating in the 2022 Olympics, when it was ultimately because the NHL decided not to send ANY players? This is a poorly leaded section. As someone with mental health issues, get your facts straight before you let someone post this. It isn't accurate. The NHL PULLED OUT OF THE OLYMPICS. NOT ROBIN LEHNER WITH DEPRESSION. 209.171.88.118 (talk) 05:19, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 20:23, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Lede

• I think I've mentioned this a few times, but can we try to avoid two links next to each other - ice hockey goaltender. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:33, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • This is the first time I think this particular issue has come up; it's pretty standard for the WP to be phrased as "professional ice hockey [position with link]", not sure how to rephrase in a way that wouldn't be awkward. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• father, Henrik Lundqvist's personal coach - needs a reword. is Henrik his father, or is his personal coach the father? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:33, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed to who personally coached Henrik Lundqvist. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• but opted - opting... Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:33, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed to opting instead. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

General

• Considering the person is from Sweden, maybe use association football rather than "soccer". Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed. Article (from Canadian source) used "soccer" so I accidentally overlooked. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Only 19 years old at the time, Lehner became both the youngest goaltender in Senators history and the youngest Swedish goaltender to appear in an NHL game in his debut. - a bit surprised this isn't in the lede..Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Added to lede. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• taking the win - featuring in a win, prior wording suggests he won the match for the team. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Just like MLB pitchers, individual goaltenders are credited with wins and losses, so I can change this if desired, but the old wording is still accurate. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• helped carry - puff, avoid. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Rephrased sentence.
• taking the loss - I'm sure these are American terms, but they can be rewritten to just state the team lost. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • See below. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• taking the loss in the 7–6 Western Conference victory.[33 - did they win or lose then? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Rephrased as goaltending for the Eastern Conference team in their 7–6 loss to the West.
• Meanwhile, after his exit, minor-league goaltender Andrew Hammond was called up and proceeded to take the Senators on a winning streak to the 2015 Stanley Cup playoffs - this isn't really about this subject. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Removed. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• His luck did not continue - are we saying all his previous victories were lucky? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed to He was less effective. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• dominate - puff, avoid. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed to was adept in net. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Just a note - it is a "semi-final" internationally. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed in the international section but not in the main body, as the NHL uses "semifinal". — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Where are the statistics section sourced? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:29, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Added source. — GhostRiver 18:52, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have
  WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:23, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply
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  • Lee Vilenski I've addressed everything except where noted. Unfortunately, it may be a moment before I can review something of yours, as I am still recovering from my motorcycle crash and will be moving across town in a couple of weeks. — GhostRiver 18:53, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]