Talk:Scottish Council of Jewish Communities

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This article reads very much like an advert. In particular, the activities section, while I don't doubt much of it is true, largely concentrates on it's own self-promotion using bare URLs to other related organisations. I think an overhaul of this section using news articles would make this section more suitable for Wikipedia. In addition, the list of achievements in a bulleted list makes for difficult reading - having this reformatted as prose would go a long way to improving this article. I feel completely unqualified to tackle this, as I haven't any knowledge in the realm of religion of any kind, let alone Judaism, however I thought it would be best to alert the issues to someone who is more capable than myself of fixing the issues. Griceylipper (talk) 13:45, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]